Just For You Poetry

I feel transported by both the pace and content of your inspiring gem

I so know the feeling - I was just on pf and gave up in disgust and deep disappointment, and though I will leave my poems there too for the sake of posterity and the few there who are left who can still write something worth reading, I fled here right now to find some intelligence, heart and talent ...

Yes, how true - 'loneliness invades all the empty spaces' - sad and beautiful poem

Seamless - delightful!

Inspiring write, Seema - made my day!

wonderful write that has me smiling

This really strikes a chord - how ubiquitous these gadgets and how they rob one of quiet and piece - well said!

so perfect it takes my breath away - Wow! is the word

I find your poem uplifting - great maxim to live by

Moving poem. Those moments or hours before the parting can be so poignant and memorable - you have captured this beautifully, Sandra

Superbly satisfying poem - it is all it should be to grace such a special day as this for your dear son. Has grace and elegance, reverence and warmth. A real winner!

Superb mastery of both the technical and emotive aspects of this poem. I love the way you held my attention, almost lulled at first in the delightful imagery, only to be woken into that sense of profound loss with the turning point in your fine poem. Top work!

utterly beautiful - has a deeply satisfying feel to it and I am aware of a sense of awe and respect in being allowed to glimpse a love such as this where no words are needed

Outch! I really felt that last line. Such a beautiful, wistful poem made all the more potent by the snatches of life painted with such appealing candour. Much enjoyed

I love the way you bring innovative imagery to this wonderful atmospheric scene