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by LorettaYoung
Fri Jul 08, 2016 12:38 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Poet Man ~ sonnet
Replies: 5
Views: 9801

Re: The Poet Man ~ sonnet

Beautiful poem Stella, both in imagery and execution a pleasure to read. It isn't hard to fall in love with the words of a poet, it's one of the closest things to beauty and meaning, and those words, so often reflect the depths and goodness in the writer. A poem of true Kindred spirits.
by LorettaYoung
Fri Jul 08, 2016 12:30 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Forever There
Replies: 8
Views: 9801

Re: Forever There

A beautiful poem, and prayer Shelly. The imagery is beautiful, and fits so well in the 10 syllable lines. Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:43 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2016 - Faith Makes Life Worthwhile
Replies: 6
Views: 9373

Re: 2016 - Faith Makes Life Worthwhile

An inspiration, nice phrasing and rhyme. Well done. Best Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:41 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Daughters Dance
Replies: 5
Views: 7661

Re: Daughters Dance

Nice Imagery and alliteration Colleen and a very enchanting picture. Well done. Best Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Mon Jul 04, 2016 12:00 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Springtime ~ palindrome poem
Replies: 10
Views: 13263

Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Stella, Hi, I'm sorry to write here, but I can't figure out how to send you a PM and I have a message for you. Best Loretts *rose*
by LorettaYoung
Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:57 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: After Sunset
Replies: 7
Views: 8642

Re: After Sunset

I remember this; very beautiful, it feels like a beautiful day on vacation; the imagery is so enchanting, and the assonance and alliteration make it a very peaceful rhythm, like the earth's rotation. Best Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Sat Jul 02, 2016 12:11 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Springtime ~ palindrome poem
Replies: 10
Views: 13263

Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

This has such beautiful and inspiring imagery; and the form is so beautiful and intricate. It looks very difficult. Great write. Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Sat Jul 02, 2016 12:06 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Treasure of The Sierra Madre
Replies: 4
Views: 6707

Re: The Treasure of The Sierra Madre

Thank you, Stella, Cindy and Sheema very much. Cindy, are you Solsticescalping from AP? Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Fri Jul 01, 2016 11:50 pm
Forum: Introduce yourself
Topic: Hello to all!
Replies: 6
Views: 19315

Re: Hello to all!

Hi everybody, Stella, Cindy, Shelly and Colleen, sounds like girls night out! Please call me Loretta. I was educated in Psychology, Philosophy and Nursing, and when I retired, two years ago, with no knowledge of poetry at all, felt the inspiration to write poetry. About a year ago, I, like you colle...
by LorettaYoung
Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:10 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Out of orbit.
Replies: 4
Views: 7177

Re: Out of orbit.

Very true and very sad. It almost seems that any day we rise, we could spin out of orbit. Thank you for the inspirational phrasing, nicely penned work. Best Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:07 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy
Replies: 3
Views: 6965

Re: 2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy

Beautiful thoughts phrased with excellence. Inspiring. Best Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:05 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Smile ~ double etheree
Replies: 3
Views: 8157

Re: Smile ~ double etheree

Love the messages within this poem; the form is wonderful, Bravo, Loretta
by LorettaYoung
Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:01 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Treasure of The Sierra Madre
Replies: 4
Views: 6707

The Treasure of The Sierra Madre

The scent of ore sails on the breeze, from tropic mists that hang from trees. There gather ghosts of tall tales told, of ancient mountains gowned in gold. The paupers sit beneath the trees and there inhale the luring breeze: then dreaming seek the scent of ore, in mountains rich with mystic lore. Th...

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