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by Noodlehead1997
Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:22 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Fallen Star
Replies: 3
Views: 4929

Fallen Star

The stars in the sky continue to shine But they never come in contact Yet, we all gaze at them with love Each night they make a comeback.  Are they trying to show us How to make it on our own  Go forth and twinkle like a star And then like them go home.  But does that star get lonely  Does it sit a...
by Noodlehead1997
Sun Apr 05, 2015 8:03 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Betrayal
Replies: 4
Views: 6294

Betrayal

I'm driving through the rain My life is whizzing by Rain rolling down the window Tears streaming from my eyes The sky's been grey throughout the day My thoughts as dark as night Images of you with my sister Made me see the light Pull yourself together girl! Don't even answer his text Muster up your...
by Noodlehead1997
Mon Feb 16, 2015 8:53 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: R.I.P
Replies: 6
Views: 6459

R.I.P

For the short time I have known you You have brought smiles and laughter Helped me decorate my apartment Became a friend of the family's I cannot tell you, How deeply saddened I am to hear that you have passed I miss you already We did not speak much, but when we did It was nothing but banter and la...
by Noodlehead1997
Fri Jan 02, 2015 7:28 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Happy New Year - 2015
Replies: 3
Views: 4715

Happy New Year - 2015

10 Another year is almost here 9 Raise a toast and let's all cheer 8 Auld Lang Syne; good times with friends 7 Party until the year ends 6 Resolutions you probably won't keep 5 Losing weight? Get more sleep? 4 Learn from mistakes; don't procrastinate 3 This year has flown; time to congr...
by Noodlehead1997
Fri Jan 02, 2015 7:27 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2015 Wishes For You.
Replies: 4
Views: 5267

Re: 2015 Wishes For You.

Happy New Year, Fay! Have a great one. loved this poem, was truly amazing.
by Noodlehead1997
Sun Dec 14, 2014 8:55 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Abandonment
Replies: 1
Views: 3550

Abandonment

Mum, You don’t care, I know that now. The pain you caused Wasn’t always bearable Now, you have another kid; Another partner. And you couldn’t be happier, Sadly, I’m glad you’re not here. I sometimes wondered, ‘What if you came back?’ What would I do or say? It’s simple really, ‘go away.’ So take it...
by Noodlehead1997
Sun Dec 14, 2014 8:54 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Christmas Party
Replies: 6
Views: 6308

Re: The Christmas Party

Your grandkids are so cute,Stella! What a beautiful piece indeed.
by Noodlehead1997
Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:51 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Honest Lyrebird (Alouette Poem)
Replies: 4
Views: 6525

Re: Honest Lyrebird (Alouette Poem)

Karin, such a gorgeous poem, love the picture too. I love me some David Attenborough every now and then. :)

Gorgeous wee ditty.
by Noodlehead1997
Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:50 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: A Poem
Replies: 7
Views: 7739

Re: A Poem

I love the repetition of "October has spoken" -- amazing as ever and powerful.

Loved the poem, all-in-all.
by Noodlehead1997
Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:49 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Poet’s Garden
Replies: 4
Views: 5117

Re: The Poet’s Garden

Now, this was absolutely stunning, Stella. I love the imagery and the video to go - excellent.
by Noodlehead1997
Thu Dec 11, 2014 12:36 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Cyber Girl
Replies: 5
Views: 5321

Cyber Girl

I'm a teen girl living on the wire, Caught up in a network, dodging thieves and liars. Engaged to a boy I've never seen, As long as he's got gigabytes - I'll live my dream! 200 friends that I've never met, Are they always there for me? You bet! I venture into FaceTime with just ...
by Noodlehead1997
Tue Dec 09, 2014 12:50 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Oops and Tablecloth
Replies: 6
Views: 6707

Re: Oops and Tablecloth

This made me laugh, a funny poem.
by Noodlehead1997
Tue Dec 09, 2014 12:49 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: A Chill in the Air
Replies: 4
Views: 5172

Re: A Chill in the Air

Enya is amazing... I so love her, this songs goes perfectly well with your poem, this is a gem.
by Noodlehead1997
Tue Dec 09, 2014 12:48 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Dickie Sparrow’s Christmas (no:21 in series)
Replies: 6
Views: 5917

Re: Dickie Sparrow’s Christmas (no:21 in series)

I love Dickie Sparrow Series! It makes me smile, Dickie is such a cute little Sparrow and your imagination just shines in this one!
by Noodlehead1997
Thu Dec 04, 2014 2:10 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Me and my Shadow
Replies: 6
Views: 6463

Re: Me and my Shadow

Oh wow Stella, now this one is great! I was giggling in bits but this is so smart and the rhyme, perfect! What a poem! Very relatable!
by Noodlehead1997
Thu Dec 04, 2014 2:05 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Last Night Home Tomorrow
Replies: 10
Views: 8853

Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

I just love this one! The imagery is so vivid you can picture everything, it is simply divine -- loving the imagery, by the way! :D
by Noodlehead1997
Thu Dec 04, 2014 2:05 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: As Never Before.
Replies: 4
Views: 5872

Re: As Never Before.

Oh Fay, this is utterly gorgeous. I loved the picture and your sweet words. What a delightful read.
by Noodlehead1997
Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:57 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Last Night Home Tomorrow
Replies: 10
Views: 8853

Re: Last Night Home Tomorrow

This is so romantic Tom. I loved this one, gorgeous imagery and wording... I am in love, with a poem!:D
by Noodlehead1997
Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:53 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Black Mascara Tears
Replies: 6
Views: 7080

Black Mascara Tears

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Who knew, I would cry for you
You swept me off my feet,
And stole my heart.

Who knew, I would die for you
You made up fantasises
Lied about our future.

Who knew I would mourn you
After the lies where just stories.

Who knew, my eyes would cry

Black Mascara Tears
by Noodlehead1997
Sun Nov 30, 2014 10:54 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: All in Vain
Replies: 4
Views: 5634

All in Vain

I was hit with it all of a sudden Like a thunderbolt out of the Blue My temperature soared, my heart missed a beat And my blood boiled like some kind of brew. I knew it wasn’t contagious I had hoped it was all in my mind So I locked parts of me in the Tower And falsified life of kind. Poor little h...
by Noodlehead1997
Sun Nov 30, 2014 10:54 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Poetry don't sell
Replies: 6
Views: 6357

Re: Poetry don't sell

Oh this is simply a beauty!! I loved this, it made me giggle but, it is also very thought-provoking. I love this one, welcome to the site! :D
by Noodlehead1997
Sun Nov 30, 2014 7:10 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: A Secret Garden
Replies: 5
Views: 5589

Re: A Secret Garden

This is beautiful Stella. An excellent poem written by you as always.
by Noodlehead1997
Sat Nov 29, 2014 10:46 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Winter Hiker
Replies: 9
Views: 8267

Re: Winter Hiker

Oh this is utterly gorgeous. I so loved this one.
by Noodlehead1997
Sat Nov 29, 2014 10:08 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Dad Says, "No Second Chance."
Replies: 2
Views: 4217

Dad Says, "No Second Chance."

He comes from the slums down town I live on Wimbledon Hill Socially were poles apart I love him still He's never worked since college Says I'll never want He'll keep me in the manner to which I'm accustomed It all sounds so nonchalant All of a sudden He's changing the rules Wants me to move in But ...
by Noodlehead1997
Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:13 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding
Replies: 4
Views: 5342

Re: Modern haiku - prompt Wedding

Haha, I love this! Love the way you structured the poem.
by Noodlehead1997
Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:13 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Who Dares.
Replies: 3
Views: 4708

Re: Who Dares.

This was so good. I liked it, good imagery -- the little fella looks hungry for sure!
by Noodlehead1997
Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:12 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Little Green Blanket - haibun
Replies: 5
Views: 5404

Re: The Little Green Blanket - haibun

This is really good. I am with Stella, I did not know what a "haibun" poem was... Interesting, I do like it though. A really impressive piece for sure.
by Noodlehead1997
Sat Nov 29, 2014 3:10 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Sweet Talk
Replies: 5
Views: 7342

Sweet Talk

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I love you for the things you say
And, for the things you don’t.
When you say: “We’ll last forever”
In my heart, I know we won’t.

I love you for the truths you tell
And, for the little lies.
I’ll settle for remembrance
When it’s time to say, “Goodbye.”

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