A pleasure to be able to relax in to this beautiful autumn imagery, as i look out of my window the leaves here are falling in a myriad of gorgeous warm colours.
My time of year portrayed in a lovely poem.. thank you David
Wow, you have been busy Tom with this difficult form which seems to be Celtic in origin..i have posted the format in our "HOW TO " guide, and think this example of yours is truly lovely...thank you for introducing us to it
https://farm4.staticflickr.com/3846/14570400707_dbd06b8c97_m.jpg Dickie Sparrow ruffled his feathers at flirtatious Frankie Finch after he caught his wife with him flapping wings in a passionate clinch. Frankie said they were dancing, but Dickie knew he was telling lies. “Just you leave my wife alo...
Your wonderful rhyme and flow smoothly carries us along gently into this mellow mid-September day, when enjoying the moment is all that matters, and tomorrow is far away.. lovely and peaceful penning David.
https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5729/20847687633_8bcf2401ff_m.jpg (Following on from Tom's heartbreaking war poem, the truth of which almost had me in tears i must admit.) How long until the light comes Daddy, how long until I can see your face, how long will I be in the dark Daddy, can ...
Hi Tom and is good to see you back posting again.... I am really proud and pleased that you have chosen to post this poem on my site, it is a reminder, and the world should have constant reminders that war is futile, government after government feed the youth of today as well as yesterday that they ...
Perfect sentiments David, i love your gentleness and life is a mystery and a miracle , better we don't delve too deep and just enjoy the gifts we have..
http://i743.photobucket.com/albums/xx76/stellafurness/1f3738c3-1359-459c-b244-0bf0c10a424f_zpskl1dchur.jpg A time for everything they say yet everything comes with age, creaking joints, vagueness of mind and eyes dulled upon the page Yet I know I have blossomed in finding that which I had passed in...
Thank you David, he was a great boxer indeed and sadly i have not thought about him for years as Mohammad Ali always is at the forefront of boxing news.
What a great tribute to well deserving sports hero...
A beautiful and flow to your words David, and such a sad , almost wistful poem; of course her smile will linger in your heart for always even it is just a trace...
http://i743.photobucket.com/albums/xx76/stellafurness/grim%20reaper_zps72qbdmsv.jpg I‘ll go when I’m ready and not before ‘tis none but i who will decide my fate, I am not prepared to go through that door Still in the moonlight the tide laps my shore, Grim Reaper and friends will just have to wait,...
The progression from young lustful emotions to realizing what real love is all about, you are great at providing your readers with wonderful metaphors Rick..
i like this Rick, haven't we all been warmed by the soul of another and yet never really made a full connection because life got in the way. Yet the small glow of warmth has stayed..
Really well done, cigarette smoke does "Snake" into circles and your lungs slithering into the smallest channels to annoy and irritate until finally it spits its venomous cancer.
https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5700/20536974594_6217d147eb_m.jpg ‘Neath a cloak of darkness bedsprings squeak, dogs bark and cats cry In lost reflections water darkens willow weeps and lovers sigh One last raindrop falls so sadly veiled clouds and watery sky In the distance a train rumbles fading a...
https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8826/16560722753_ddf674a420_m.jpg You have a kindness I see it in you blush, it comes gentle to my cheeks a blush new wistful longing this feeling is new “Hush“ says my heart, “Take your time now just hush” Hurry I will not, there is no hurry of heartbeats and the exc...
i often do this as well Rick, go back to a poem and change some of it. I enjoyed the first version and i enjoyed the revised version just as well although it was slightly different... , in another few months you may well be tempted to change it again and each reader will find something they like abo...
I have seen the most beautiful photographs of New England in the autumn, and it more than compares with my own beautiful Yorkshire. How fortunate you are to have the colourful maple trees;i was out yesterday collecting conkers from beneath our horse chestnut trees the same trees ,the same park alway...
https://farm1.staticflickr.com/728/20448051363_cfb31bf0c4_m.jpg I think about that summer night and how moonlit ripples beckoned us from our stroll along the blissful shore hand in hand with love and sensuality ”Let’s bathe in the moonlight, swim beneath the stars! “ you cried, as you stripped your...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7moHazyC9Zg In she flounced swirling her gold and russet skirts dancing flirtatiously on the whispering wind, she blew soft sensual kisses across the ears of corn until they swayed excitedly in her loving caress. Rich and ripe berries blushed in the hedgerows, juices...
i am almost moved to tears David by this beautiful and peaceful poem. The safeness in the cocoon of the nestled boats is such a lovely place to portray your feelings and in the second reading i felt like whispering so as not to disturb...you truly touched my heart with this write my friend.