Just For You Poetry

Cindy

This is so beautiful and inspiring. I love how hope shines in this poem.

Cindy

This is so beautiful. It describes falling to sleep perfectly. I have never written a sonnet. I can see how they would be difficult. You're very good at it.

Cindy

A memory Rising again from dusty corners A memory There...dappled light danced on the cool water Tiny fish flashed silver in random rays Bare feet loitered in the silky current Rising again from Dusty corners A memory Long ago That moment in time Long ago Between glistening banks, bare feet waded Re...

Cindy

This is really pretty. I also love the form. I may have to try this form one day.

Cindy

This is very beautiful. I love that you personified trees in this. I love trees.

Cindy

So full of misery, yet quite beautiful too. I love the desperation in this poem.

Cindy

Very moving poem.

Cindy

A very lovely tribute to single fathers.

Cindy

This is a very good haiku. The mood of the haiku truly fits the title.

Cindy

So beautiful.

Cindy

I really like how you picked a different flower for each stanza. Beautiful.

Cindy

This is very beautiful. I thought I had commented on this poem a while back, but apparently I hadn't. A very lovely form.

Cindy

I love this. I love that you gave personality to trees in this way. It's very fascinating to picture the scene for me, since I love trees so much. Wonderful poem.

Cindy

This is so very moving. I like how you said that you look back and see that laugh. It's nice when we have memories that stand out to us like that. A moment in time to keep forever with us.

Cindy

I love the lines - "She had been swept away / by the rapid river of dreams". Like the poem.

Cindy

Nice poem. Interesting title.

Cindy

This is a lovely, romantic poem.

Cindy

I find this very beautiful. I especially love the last two lines.

Cindy

Great poem. This poem is a great reminder not to be too harsh with our judgements.

Cindy

This is hilarious! I love the last stanza. Great one.

Cindy

Beautiful.

Cindy

So sad, but lovely poem.

Cindy

So beautiful.

Cindy

Very lovely. I am very interested in this poetry form. One day I hope to try it. As of now, I am taking a free class called Beginning Haiku on allpoetry. I am so glad I chose to do that before writing haibun. I thought I understood haiku and knew about it, but I have learned so much in just a few le...

Cindy

Great poem. Beautifully written. I love the video you put with it too.

Cindy

This is wonderful. I love the form. The rhythm is fun and of course the rhyming is perfect.

Cindy

This is very beautiful. I like the form you used. It looks nice.

Cindy

I love the ending. It's true that there's always someone e bigger and better out there.

Cindy

Lovely. I love the third sentence.

Cindy

I love this. Kind of a tongue twister.

Cindy

This is sweet.

Cindy

This is sweet.

Cindy

Love this poem. Your words feel like spring. That's an adorable picture too.

Cindy

A truly beautiful poem.

Cindy

Very beautiful and impressive. Love the video.

Cindy

What an appealing form. I love the last two lines.

Cindy

Great tribute. I love Steven's poetry. It always brings a smile.

Cindy

Very moving. Great poem.

Cindy

Very pretty. I love how you compared trying to catch a leaf to the chasing of dreams.

Cindy

This is so moving and beautiful. I love the last two lines.

Cindy

How can it be, How can it be Within the frigid ground Where none, but root and worm may see With silence all around She lays there now; she fell asleep Her secrets now, she'll ever keep She lays there now She lays there now A vault of secrets buried deep How can it be, How can it be That I still see...

Cindy

Very lovely. I truly don't remember the sixties. I was too young. I only remember tiny segments of time, but I love the nostalgia. I feel like I remember the sixties better than I really do.

Cindy

I love this poem. So very beautiful. I especially love the last stanza and the last line. Exquisite.

Cindy

Very inspirational and beautiful.

Cindy

Very beautiful. You put into words what I feel when in a garden or even a forest.

Cindy

I love it. I too will have to read some of Cohen's poems.

Cindy

Such a lovely poem. I too love the stanza beginning with the line "Her petals lay.."

Cindy

Very beautiful. I love scenes like this. Even finer in a poem. I could see it like I was there myself and it's my memory instead of something I read.

Cindy

Your poem is very beautiful. I like the style in which you wrote it. It's unique.

Cindy

Love every stanza with the clever rhymes and images. Great poem.

Just For You Poetry

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