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by Karin Anderson
Sat May 02, 2015 6:40 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Farewell to Pater
Replies: 8
Views: 7756

Re: Farewell to Pater

A tear jerking read indeed, and I looked up the word 'pater' so I have learned a new word today. I love the flow and the rhyme and appreciate the sad sentiment you go through as the poem progresses Steven.
by Karin Anderson
Sat May 02, 2015 6:29 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: How Can It Be (a Trijan Refrain)
Replies: 8
Views: 9642

Re: How Can It Be (a Trijan Refrain)

A most impressive write using the great tool of a form I have not been aware of. The repeats work brilliantly for a dramatic effect, and congratulations to you for crafting this deeply moving poem Cindy.
by Karin Anderson
Fri May 01, 2015 12:22 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Finding Me
Replies: 5
Views: 5059

Re: Finding Me

This really pulls at the heartstrings with such emotive and incredible imagery. Also The picture adds to the pathos the poem evokes for me Stella and "they echo in my dreams until I awaken" really did it for me.
by Karin Anderson
Fri Apr 24, 2015 10:23 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Laid Bare
Replies: 7
Views: 6106

Re: Laid Bare

A sultry fantasy that brilliantly exposes a lover who hides, and you have inspired me to read Leonard Cohan's poems too thank you Stella!
by Karin Anderson
Fri Apr 24, 2015 10:03 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: On a loss felt more and more
Replies: 8
Views: 7058

Re: On a loss felt more and more

You always put your heart, soul and spirit into your writing Richard, and I feel your anguish and loss too! This is very well crafted with outstanding rhythm and rhyme, and a pleasure to read even though it is very very mournful Richard.
by Karin Anderson
Fri Apr 24, 2015 9:54 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Treading Gently.
Replies: 5
Views: 5326

Re: Treading Gently.

An amazing garden of dreams with outstanding imagery, and you bring its mystery to light so wonderfully Fay.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 23, 2015 12:52 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Forget-Me-Not Two Words
Replies: 11
Views: 12442

The Forget-Me-Not Two Words

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qrei53NV30c (Incremental Refrain Poem) Like a lifeboat washed out to sea the two words I need elude me. I swim with freestyle to find them but they slip and sail awash, far far distant from reason’s grasp. My head begins to pound thought waves to spume a whir...
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 23, 2015 12:08 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2015 - Play the Piano of Life
Replies: 1
Views: 4210

Re: 2015 - Play the Piano of Life

I love "piano" as a metaphor as it creatively allows the reader to focus on the positivity of life. I feel like listening to some beautiful piano music now thank you Seema.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 23, 2015 12:01 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Land Of Milk And Subsidy
Replies: 6
Views: 7934

Re: Land Of Milk And Subsidy

A compelling and most amusing read with the sheep, hen and cow all playing their appropriate parts. Like Seema I find it interesting too and I love how the title is repeated in the closing line to emphasize your powerful message Steven.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 23, 2015 11:40 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Still-Near.
Replies: 5
Views: 5472

Re: The Still-Near.

This seems such a tragic parting of the ways dear Fay, and thank God for writing where the pain can be placed on a page to help your hurting heart.
I really like Stella's philosophy in her closing words to move gently forward and Richards closing words as well.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 23, 2015 11:32 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Making for the Way Stone
Replies: 8
Views: 7354

Re: Making for the Way Stone

A picturesque write crafted with wonderful rhythm and rhyme which is such a pleasure to read Tom.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 23, 2015 11:28 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Summer Maiden ~ sonnet
Replies: 5
Views: 4856

Re: Summer Maiden ~ sonnet

A glorious Sonnet and I knew your muse would return as soon as she could. I feel privileged to bathed with the beauty of your summer images, and I have read it four times, and each time I love its magic more and more thank you my dear friend Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:47 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: This Space
Replies: 5
Views: 5068

Re: This Space

What a great way to take up space with many different emotions creatively written. We all lose our muse from time to time and having had a rest she will give you many more ideas. The second last stanza is really beautiful and my favourite Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:10 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Sunset Dessert
Replies: 6
Views: 6027

Re: Sunset Dessert

This sounds like heaven on earth and I can imagine it all, with the taste buds oozing with lychees and vanilla bathed in golden light A most gorgeous flavorsome write Tom!
by Karin Anderson
Mon Apr 20, 2015 12:49 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Ode To Death
Replies: 7
Views: 6764

Re: Ode To Death

Such a fitting Ode To Death where positivity overcomes fear with happiness and peace. My favorite stanza is the second one as it really speaks to me, and I always look forward to reading your classical poetry Joseph.
by Karin Anderson
Mon Apr 20, 2015 12:33 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: If Only In My Heart
Replies: 10
Views: 10404

Re: If Only In My Heart

A lyrical and delightful ballad on nature, and the last two lines round off the poem beautifully Cindy.
by Karin Anderson
Mon Apr 20, 2015 12:14 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Tell Us.
Replies: 6
Views: 6090

Re: Tell Us.

An astounding write on behalf of war widows and the picture adds yet more pathos to the horror of war. "Death laughing at our shivers" is such a strong image it brought tears to my eyes Fay.
by Karin Anderson
Mon Apr 20, 2015 10:18 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Robin
Replies: 5
Views: 4630

Re: Robin

I too love birds and this scruffy little robin is no exception. What a whopping mealworm he has in his beak and the worm matches his waistcoat. This is such a pleasure to read, and I am enchanted by your wonderful presentation of picture and poem to show off your gorgeous robin thank you Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:43 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Much More.
Replies: 4
Views: 5725

Re: Much More.

Wow! When I clicked on your poem the picture of the waterfall falls down the page and I can almost hear the forceful sounds you so vividly describe.
'cliffs lips' is so creative and I very much admire the assonance in the last line too Fay.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:32 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Love’s Thread
Replies: 5
Views: 5552

Re: Love’s Thread

A delicate, intricate and beautiful love poem rich imagery that only you can write Stella. I love how you personify the petal and weave it through the latter stanzas is it becomes magical for me.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 1:10 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry
Replies: 8
Views: 8884

All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3OUl-kzq74 The timeless secret of the universe Is a lover’s long shot gamble at play. Some sense it is a high and mighty curse And know it’s a sky rocket price to pay. This biologic cracked phenomenon Is crazed instant attraction chemistry. Mad magnetic pull on wome...
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:51 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Sweeter Than the Guns
Replies: 6
Views: 5557

Re: Sweeter Than the Guns

This pentaiku has such a huge impact on me with the vivid replies to the questions. History keeps repeating itself over and over and kudos for such brilliant penning Tom.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:40 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Cereal Dater
Replies: 5
Views: 5234

Re: Cereal Dater

Your imagination knows no bounds and your play on words with 'cereal dater' is hilarious and so are other funny cereal things. Good luck with your pretty pop tart and may you both live happily ever after Steven.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:29 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Just One Try!! (A Filthy Poem)
Replies: 3
Views: 4644

Re: Just One Try!! (A Filthy Poem)

O.C.D. is such a BIG worry and really exists unfortunately. A mischievous satire that only you can craft with your clean and clever pen and its never to late to give it one more try Steven! :roll: :lol: :roll:
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 12:14 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Elusive Love
Replies: 6
Views: 5906

Re: Elusive Love

Love has its downs and ups and it was well worth waiting for. The last stanza is a joyful triumph, and I love happy endings and the way you have shared your love story Joseph.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 10:51 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: For All It´s Worth
Replies: 4
Views: 5126

Re: For All It´s Worth

Such good advice and the 'dead horse flogged' really did it for me and loved the rhyme and rhythm too Tom!
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 16, 2015 10:46 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2015 - During this Time of Loss and Sorrow
Replies: 4
Views: 5215

Re: 2015 - During this Time of Loss and Sorrow

I'm sure your friend will treasure your most beautiful and heartfelt words, and they have given consolation at a most difficult time Seema.
by Karin Anderson
Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:18 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Thoughts on Your Leaving
Replies: 7
Views: 5922

Re: Thoughts on Your Leaving

Saying goodbye can be oh so difficult and this poignant write is so moving I have tears in my eyes. I wish I could give you a hug even though this may have happened in the past Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:55 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Swedish Birthday Party In Australia
Replies: 7
Views: 7413

Swedish Birthday Party In Australia

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9UdoJMvT7Ac Butter creaming almond orange musicians tap a fun folk pace crescent moon cookie smiles bursting with sugar and spice. Dancers bounce floorboards like rubber kaleidoscope balls rioting rhythm to violin’s haunting harmonic thrust. A dimpled woman child blo...
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:27 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre
Replies: 6
Views: 5520

Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

I admire the rhyming couplets too and my favorite line is ''whilst laughing up a crooked sleeve'. Politics are so frustrating and you bring this to the fore with your intelligent witticism once again Steven.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:15 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Blue Hour
Replies: 6
Views: 5843

Re: The Blue Hour

Such glorious images in and mystical write and your words and picture bring the sky to life. The blue hour is certainly magical Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:08 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2015 - For a Pleasant Ride of Life
Replies: 4
Views: 4529

Re: 2015 - For a Pleasant Ride of Life

It is all about reflection it seems, and rightly so when when we can't think straight. I really like how you use nature 's imagery to teach others in a creative way Seema.
by Karin Anderson
Fri Apr 10, 2015 7:19 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: First Flush.
Replies: 6
Views: 5742

Re: First Flush.

A delightful spring write and and a stunning presentation with the picture. I love your opening lines and the meaningful use of color that evolves
throughout the poem thank you Fay.
by Karin Anderson
Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:16 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Life's Weary Road-Sonnet
Replies: 6
Views: 5998

Re: Life's Weary Road-Sonnet

A good solid Sonnet on mortality with impeccable rhythm and rhyme. I can certainly emphasize as losing our friends is sad indeed, yet we have our poetry friends to share our ups and downs and we appreciate beauty more than ever before. Thank you for always sharing your poetry with me Joseph.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:12 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: My Tribute to Sanity
Replies: 6
Views: 5767

Re: My Tribute to Sanity

Ernesto is my favorite composer and I am sure he would have loved this Tribute to him. He has composed music for 75 motion pictures and he has graced some of my poems. I have only found out his father was a composer and he lost both his parents in a terrible auto accident when he was 13 years old. M...
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 08, 2015 1:06 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Busy , Busy
Replies: 3
Views: 5072

Re: Busy , Busy

I hear so many people say time flies they are retired, and I too can relate to this as I am also retired. I love the title and the humour thank you Jan.
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:58 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: For Tom ( a response to his poem)
Replies: 6
Views: 5504

Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

A beautiful sequel as a response to Tom's poem. This is true love so, I do not disapprove of the sharing a bed although they are unwed. Plus this is what happens in society now. I also love how 'he would gently groom and she would purr and bloom' for the internal rhyme thank you Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:50 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Day We Met
Replies: 7
Views: 6425

Re: The Day We Met

A delightful write with and a humorous conclusion that really makes me smile. I must go and read Stella's sequel now to see what you and the stray cat are really up to are Tom!
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:43 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Haiku
Replies: 2
Views: 5333

Re: Haiku

I too like this modern haiku and 'puddles of flowers' is unique and creative Cindy.
by Karin Anderson
Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:57 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Not Crying
Replies: 5
Views: 5067

Re: Not Crying

Your precious denial is so moving especially with 'my lip trembles'. A tender and most beautiful write Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:50 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Betrayal
Replies: 4
Views: 6226

Re: Betrayal

From bitterness to assertiveness and kudos for making the right decision and I love the picture too!
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 04, 2015 5:23 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Seasonal Cycle
Replies: 4
Views: 5033

Re: Seasonal Cycle

A beautiful full circle seasonal write, and admire the alliteration too as 'burst the bulging buds' really caught my eye thank you Stephen.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 04, 2015 5:13 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: When The Flowers Bloom (Pentaiku)
Replies: 5
Views: 6821

Re: When The Flowers Bloom (Pentaiku)

A great write and beautifully written adhering to the pentaiku form thank you Cindy.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 04, 2015 4:56 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Yielding.
Replies: 5
Views: 5039

Re: Yielding.

I agree with Tom about reading it over and over again as I already have. The 'exposed veins on trees shiver' really caught my eye, yet there were
many more brilliant images to enjoy Fay.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 04, 2015 4:48 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: NIGHT AWAKENS.
Replies: 3
Views: 4444

Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.

The splendor of the picture and your images are stunning and I too melted with your last line thank you Fay.
by Karin Anderson
Sat Apr 04, 2015 4:40 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Dickie Sparrow’s Easter Egg
Replies: 6
Views: 5552

Re: Dickie Sparrow’s Easter Egg

LOL This is priceless write and Dickie sparrow does not believe in being good for Mrs Sparrow. I can imagine it all especially with egg on their beaks!
Have a Happy Easter with yummy chocolate eggs to to share and relish Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 02, 2015 11:14 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Mother Dear (Pentaiku poem)
Replies: 3
Views: 4664

Re: Mother Dear (Pentaiku poem)

This really made with laugh and what a character mother dear was. The last senryu really shows off your witticism Tom. :lol: :roll: :cry: :lol:
by Karin Anderson
Thu Apr 02, 2015 11:06 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Dropping A Line- My Muse
Replies: 4
Views: 4678

Re: Dropping A Line- My Muse

There is nothing like nature's world and recalling happy times, when we are feeling down. I love the play on words with a line for fishing and a line or two for poetry and thank you for sharing Joseph.
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 01, 2015 9:20 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Dear Daddy ~ Pentaiku poem
Replies: 3
Views: 3863

Re: Dear Daddy ~ Pentaiku poem

Absolutely gorgeous and my favourite stanza is where the mountains have quite big feet, although I love all the stanzas. A great contribution for Tom's new form Stella.
by Karin Anderson
Wed Apr 01, 2015 9:07 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Hope and Promise By Stella and Tom
Replies: 8
Views: 7564

Re: Hope and Promise By Stella and Tom

A delightful write from two talented poets, and it is particularly significant as spring would be in your countries. We all need hope and so many people lose hope, but after they read this it could very well be restored. I notice rhyme is used, and I can imagine a song of hope and promise being sung...

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