Just For You Poetry

Cindy

Beautiful. I see spring in every stanza.

Cindy

This is a wonderful poem. I love the little journey through time.

Cindy

Great words to remember.

Cindy

The rain came down
It felt like rivers

Puddles with ocean dreams
Quivered with delight

Ahhh, thwarted again
The clouds moved on

Only the trees kept raining
A drizzle too far

Reflections languished
...not one ripple.

Cindy

This is a wonderful humorous poem. It's always fun reading your poetry.

Cindy

Very beautiful. It's a very interesting style or form.

Cindy

I like this. It is a clever piece and very beautiful.

Cindy

I am becoming too familiar with this side of life. *sigh*

Cindy

I enjoy both kinds of poems and write both. Though I understand you here.

Cindy

This was fun and very clever.

Cindy

Funny.

Cindy

Funny.

Cindy

She walks the shadows of the trees Beneath their leafy canopies When night is full, sometimes the moon Her gown aflutter in the breeze No soul can tell the reason why She walks beneath the darkened sky Among the deepest shadows there Without a whisper or a sigh She walks in silence, wearing white Wi...

Cindy

I always loved cats. This is a delightful poem.

Cindy

Spring is somewhere
In the meadow
Behind the shrubs
Among the trees

I haven't seen it
But I smelled it
Heard it, felt it
In the breeze

Though flurries cast their
White upon it
Cover it
In winter sky

I hear the birds
They know about it
Tell about it
Spring is shy.

Cindy

Love this one too. Hilarious.

Cindy

I just love this. Love the sarcasm. Brought a smile to my face. Wonderfully done.

Cindy

Happy Birthday, Joseph. Have a great one!

Cindy

I love your descriptions. They are so serene and beautiful.

Cindy

I was always a daydreamer. I used to think something was wrong with me. Others would complain of boredom. I could never figure out what was boring about having time to think. Wonderful poem.

Cindy

Love your haiku's. Beautiful words and picture.

Cindy

Quite often, I find your poems so inspirational. This one is no exception. Beautifully written.

Cindy

This is such a sweet and heartwarming poem. Beautifully written.

Cindy

A lovely little poem. I am oh, so familiar with days like that. And they do seem to end with some kind of "rainbow" too. It just kind of slowly comes into view through the haze.

Cindy

You'll have to quit running into each other like that.

Cindy

I love the images here and I love the line, "suspended in space by old bones." A perfect description since our bodies age, but our essence feels so much the same as always. Beautiful poem. (To edit, there is a little pencil Icon with two others in the upper right to the left of your name o...

Cindy

Great poem! This has an ominous feeling. It would be a disturbing dream, in spite of the bit of hope presented at the end. It feels like something that could be the theme of a great movie.

Cindy

I'm pretty much done with poetfreak too. I'll just be going back to read certain favorites of mine, but rarely, if ever, will I be posting there. I don't feel it's my job to stick around and make it a better place or save it. That's not what I signed up for. At least we have this site now. Dirt free...

Cindy

I just absolutely love this! I especially love the last several lines starting with the one that says "I do not belong to mankind..." I love the words you've chose and how they make me feel. A feeling I have no words for.

Cindy

I love this poem. It's so bright and invigorating to read.

Cindy

So romantic and beautiful. Love the rhymes.

Cindy

Interesting turn at the end there.. I wasn't expecting it.

Cindy

I love the picture created. Very well done. I appreciate the explaination of the tanka too.

Cindy

Oh, I love this. It's written so beautifully. I enjoyed the rhythm of it too.

Cindy

I love the story.

Cindy

A good reminder for everyday life too. I pray for peace.

Cindy

Very adorable tale.

Cindy

Sad, with a touch of hope. It's beautiful.

Cindy

Beautiful and inspiring. I especially like how you ended the poem. Worth reading again and again.

Cindy

This is truely inspiring. Beautiful words.

Cindy

In the glow of the streetlight They look like soldiers Standing there All in a row Each bush, ebony, against the white snow Like sentinels Ever watchful of the shadows Alert Only their very tips move in the wind As they stand guard Their appearance conjures a sinister feeling What danger requires su...

Cindy

Yes, very definately great advice and I like the way you put it.

Cindy

Okay, the word chocolate is stuck in my brain now. I must go find some.

Cindy

This is so very beautiful. It stirs long ago memories, almost forgotten.

Cindy

Very good suggestions. Thank you very much.

Cindy

I wondered where this was going. Made me smile.

Cindy

This is lovely. Well, their names are still together on the tree. Still telling of their love after all these years.

Cindy

Hope you recover perfectly, Stella. I'll be praying.

Cindy

Thany you so much, Stella and everyone. Many blessings to you all.

Cindy

I agree with everyone. Beautiful, dreamy, delightful...

Just For You Poetry

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