Just For You Poetry

Cindy

Yes, this is clever. I like this style. I may have to try it sometime.

Cindy

This is definately very clever. Great haiku.

Cindy

This is inspirational. I love that it feels so sunny.

Cindy

That sounds like one beautiful night. Your poem makes it sound so fascinating. And I so love the last four lines.

Cindy

I love the last two lines. I love how the second to last line skips off the tongue. I love your choice of words. Lovely.

Cindy

Gone, are the people
Hollowed-out their shells
Only memories remain
Staring with invisible eyes
Together

They populate the empty spaces
Outcast spirits
Who haunt
Nobody

Cindy

This is so inspiring. I love the last line.

Cindy

I'm not into Vulcans either, but I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. I wish I could say the video too, but I'm having wi-fi problems. It's too weak. Maybe some other time.

Cindy

Very beautiful. I try not to admit in any way shape or form that snow or winter can be beautiful these days, but gladly gave it a rest just for your poem. Definately beautiful.

Cindy

They are oblivious
Chattering
Nothing important
Just words

I am bored
Tired of superficial conversation
Frivolous words
Shallow

I long to speak
But know better
They are oblivious by choice

I do not tell them what they don't want to hear
I remain silent
Knowing
All by myself.

Cindy

I love this!

Cindy

This was fun and a little daring.

Cindy

A very good tribute for a friend. So sorry for your loss.

Cindy

I love the ending of this lovely poem. Gulls can be regular little thieves. Made me smile.

Cindy

Definately not natural. Frankenfood - yes, that's what it is.

Cindy

Very good poem. I can identify with this. I'm sure all writers can.

Cindy

This is heartbreaking and beautifully written.

Cindy

This is very moving. Very vivid imagery.

Cindy

This is a beautiful haiku.

Cindy

This is very lovely. The fact that grandpa dies is softened by the fact that he is now with Gran.

Cindy

This poem is fun to read. As Tom said, delightful.

Cindy

A very sad tale. Some create for themselves this barren place, then wonder where everybody went. I know a few. And yes, sometimes the gap can never be fully bridged. I like the poem. Very well written.

Cindy

This made me smile. I can picture this all too well. We've all been there. Maybe not with a hammer and nail, but we've all been there. This is an adorable poem.

Cindy

I love this. I especially love the last stanza. The poem/prayer is very beautiful.

Cindy

This is beautiful. Wonderful thoughts from the past. A great way to be remembered - included in a list of wonderful things about life.

Cindy

I too feel as though I tresspass. Peeking in the windows of your life. I see you two together. Relaxing in the living room, sitting at the table, reading books, going about life. I see the love that wraps around you both. Palpable and very beautiful.

Cindy

I think this is beautiful.

Cindy

I know what it's like I know what it's like when your world comes apart I know what it's like when your child Too old to be mothered, falls When he or she pokes a hole in the fabric of life Or just slices it wide open Suddenly, there's a sharp breath of air on the skin And you realize you're stark n...

Cindy

I love the last stanza. This poem is so lovely.

Cindy

This is is so sad. Yet, that is so often the case in life. Being a parent is hard.

Cindy

This has a very peaceful feel to it. I like it.

Cindy

I can all too well relate to this. All too well. Great poem.

Cindy

Very beautiful.

Cindy

I love this little picture of everyday life.

Cindy

Just for me? You're too kind.

Cindy

Last night the snowstorm came Falling on an already white landscape Covering the plowed streets and mounds Smoothing rough edges It came down Seen only in folds of light Felt in the shadows like a thousand icy kisses Becoming one with the cold dark river The storm stopped by morning Having transform...

Cindy

This is a beautiful poem. Everything's described so vividly. And then you planted a little mouse at the end. It's so adorable. I love it.

Cindy

I love this. I love your description of the river. Sinister, yet alluring. Then the line "he shuddered at all the dead memories"...I shuddered too. Great poem.

Cindy

I think we all know a few like him.

I love your choice of words throughout this wonderful poem. A classic for sure.

Cindy

A very happy birthday to Richard. So we share February as our birthday month. Mine is on the 22nd. February is actually shared by many in my family, oddly enough. Hope you have a wonderful, wonderful day.

Cindy

It spilled across the border and planted itself Stretching its roots like a weed Creeping across the country Springing up into whole neighborhoods and businesses Lush and vibrant So there it is... Mexico A piece of Mexico right here And I can smell it before I reach the door It smells of jalapeños, ...

Cindy

I read this on poetfreak. I'm happy to read it again and comment here too. It's a lovely, sad poem and I really like it.

Cindy

Oh, I love this picture of dawn you have painted with your words! Your poems are always so delightful and charming.

Cindy

This is so beautiful. You have a way with words, Dorothy. A real talent/gift.

Cindy

I love this haiku. I love thunderstorms.

Cindy

I love the last stanza. Especially your use of the word "hoards". A very exciting use of the word, I think. Wonderful poem.

Cindy

Hauntingly beautiful. I enjoyed the poem. The use of the name Annabel makes it all that much more musical to the ears. Nice choice.

Cindy

I think that would've haunted my dreams for a long time. You've described it quite well.

Cindy

This is wonderful! I love it. Oh, yes, chocolate! Perfect parody.

Cindy

I agree with Karin. Truely a masterpiece. I loved every word. Beautiful. Perfect.

Just For You Poetry

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