Just For You Poetry

Cindy

A very delightful way to look at bees.

Cindy

Great poem. Somewhat sad. I can understand how such medals wouldn't mean much.

Cindy

Very beautiful. I'm not familiar with this form, but I like it.

Cindy

Hope you have a wonderful birthday!

Cindy

This is so beautiful. I love the saying in the picture you've posted with your poem...very true. Growing old is way better than the alternative.

Cindy

Very inspirational. Great advice there at the end too.

Cindy

I don't know a thing about boxing, but the tribute is wonderful.

Cindy

This is a wonderful poem. So many have someone we can look back to in time and thank for the wisdom they handed to us. This is a lovely little story.

Cindy

This is wonderful, beautiful. One day I plan on writing a villanelle...when the inspiration for it hits me.

Cindy

I love this. Beautiful and sweet.

Cindy

Wow...cancer, twice. I've had plenty of problems, but so far I don't have to add cancer to the list. Hope you've seen the last of that horrible beast. You really are tough. Great for you!

Cindy

This is a very beautiful prayer.

Cindy

Very encouraging. The advice to sit and ponder what's meaningful (or even what is good in life) is very good advice. Too many people are too busy and don't take the time.

Cindy

I'd heard it said once in a movie or something, "you don't lose someone all at once. You lose them a piece at a time." The person was referring to the memory of that person that is now gone. Your poem made me think of that line. It is true. Although, we never completely lose them. Like you...

Cindy

This is very beautiful. I actually wish to write a haibun one day. I think it's a fascinating form.

Cindy

This is such a beautiful poem. It reminds me of my many walks in the woods that I used to take. It really does feel like you're so far from other people out there. Even if you're not. Just beautiful.

Cindy

Moonlight
Soft and soothing
Glistening in the darkness
Sprinkled across the dewy leaves
Perhaps...just pixie dust.

Cindy

gone now
two red tomatoes -
that dog!

Cindy

Very true. I love the poem. Although, I think it made me hungry.

Cindy

Romantic with a touch of melancholy - always a good mixture. Nice.

Cindy

Unique description. Clever.

Cindy

Great descriptions! Beautiful!

Cindy

This is just so beautiful. It's a soothing poem. Almost like a lullaby.

Cindy

Very beautiful. Love the form.

Cindy

Out of all those wonderful attributes, the title ended up with the smile. That must be some smile. A lovely poem.

Cindy

Sounds absolutely lovely. Days such as these seem too few and far between. Beautiful poem.

Cindy

The highway stretches across the land It passes through places thick with people And flickers in and out of great forests Winding its way among mountains and wetlands Parting prairie grasses Passing between ripening fields Intersecting and branching out Like a great tree, bringing life Everyday it i...

Cindy

This is a very enjoyable poem to read. The first and the last stanza make it feel like a personal gift. Very nice.

Cindy

A very sad poem, but wonderfully written. Heartbreaking.

Cindy

This is a very moving poem. I love your choice of words and images.

Cindy

Nice little poem. I like it's simplicity and I like your choice of words. I also like the message - change isn't always easy, but can be so worth it.

Cindy

Beautiful poem. I love trees, so I identify with it very much. (It's nice to be able to read and comment again. I've been without wi-fi.)

Cindy

Lovely poem. So glad for the happy ending.

Cindy

Wonderful poem. I especially love the last two lines.

Cindy

Lol! Sounds like a nice toilet. The silent close lid isn't such a bad idea. The lid has been known to slip from my fingers a few times...talk about waking the dead. Not a good thing when it's late and everyone else is already asleep. Oops!

Cindy

Beautifully said. May you have a wonderful weekend too.

Cindy

Very beautiful. I love the phrase, "tears bled into rainbows" - lovely thought.

Cindy

Beautiful words of encouragement.

Cindy

You make it sound so easy. Lol.

Cindy

Too bad she can't invite you in. I feel bad for you, having to watch your mother wander aimlessly in her own little world. That would be so hard. My prayers are with you and your mother.

Cindy

This is a very interesting story, uniquely told. I like the image of a well and it had an unexpected ending.

Cindy

A lovely poem that I am sure many can relate to. It's sometimes surreal to see old friends as they are now. Even some that aren't necessarily friends. On the news one night, I saw a picture of some man and they referred to him as a dangerous felon. He had been arrested again the night before. It slo...

Cindy

I like the image of green mountains crying. Beautiful poem.

Cindy

A wonderful poem and tribute.

Cindy

Ahhh...delicious.

Cindy

I love this poem. A wonderful place to be.

Cindy

And suddenly, there it was The sound of laughter It bubbled, brook-like, through the trees From somewhere beyond Filling the empty spaces In the lonely woods I'd never heard them before... Those children I could not see Sprites, gnomes, pixies Or perhaps the sun It's dappled light Giddy with summer ...

Cindy

Ahh, wonderful. Just what I needed to read today.

Cindy

So sorry you lost your dog. I have an old dog. He's going deaf and blind and has many other problems. I dread losing him. Very good poem.

Cindy

Beautiful poem and a nice picture to go with it.

Just For You Poetry

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