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Of times gone by, and how the restrictions placed upon a society weighed heavy on more than a few, Sandra.

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Quite the awesome and inventive write this is, Cindy. Reminds me of those soldiers who guard the Tomb of the Unknown. Great descriptiveness that truly gives the feeling of the hedgerow standing sentinel duty.

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How extraordinarily beautiful, Karin, and surely I, too, shall be in prayer for Stella. I am so glad to hear that she is healing up after the surgery.

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Well, happy birthday, dear Cindy, and I hope it was filled with much joy and bliss, Ma'am. God bless you.

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A compelling and heartfelt write, Joseph. With love, true love, there is no doubt that the ardor shall remain.

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Ha! Seems we have to work harder to put things off, my friend. Well, I guess we have all means and mechanisms to help us justify not doing what it is we should be doing. A fun and witty write....love it, sir!

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We really should have a softened heart year round...and this time of season reminds us of why it is we should be loving and caring to those around us, Sandra.

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Ha! Somehow, Tom, I do not think you shall disappoint, sir.

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Oh, but that is just so beautifully and delicately written, Stella! An impressive write using such a fantastic form to really hone the message of love, Ma'am. How glorious it is to be so fluent in so many art forms, as you are, Stella.

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Nice! How lovely this is, Stella, and the feeling of bliss and joy you convey is utterly fantastic, Ma'am.

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https://farm4.staticflickr.com/3904/14844479937_395484746d.jpg A way? or The Way. by J316 , on Flickr Easy, 'tis, to praise Your name when well it goes the flow within our lives, Your blessings felt, and with smiles we praise You so. With ease we lift up praise to You while storms are held at b...

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A gleeful, joy-filled write, with such a happy flow, Dorothy. Thank you for sharing this wonderful, uplifting write, my friend.

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How a child's laughter can utterly negate the melancholia that seeks to envelop us, Ken. A brilliant haiku!

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If only we could be sure that we didn't repeat, over and over, those mistakes that lead to such pain and embarrasment, Tom. A fun read, my friend, and one that put a big smile on my face (as I've hit my thumb too many times before, and haven't learned, it would appear).

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Ah, but we are given that opportunity to let loose when the sun is new in the sky, Sandra. A bit of housecleaning of the mind, and we are made the better for it, Ma'am.

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Your words encompass well that pain we, as parents, feel when an older child of ours suffers through misfortunes and the like. We want the best for our children, but the choices now are up to them on what it is they do in life, Ma'am.

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A beautiful sonnet that reminds us of how we should engage our remembrances with a heart filled with love, Joseph.

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With the future spread out so gloriously before us when we are younger, we give no thought to how we'll feel when we gain a few years, Dorothy...and though we still love and laugh, we also have learned of pain and have felt the sting of tears, Ma'am. A beautiful write, Ma'am.

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I have not told her of this, truly. She knows not that I write such words to glory in her magnificent manner; to bask in her beauty, her banner I fly. She is made to be unaware of words that sing out of my heart, to paper, and ever shall she never know, for never shall I read these to her. I share n...

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The external stresses placed upon us float magically away when it is we allow ourselves to venture forth through pen and ink while our inner voice sings with such a beautiful voice, Fay. We needn't be made to be crippled by the burdens others seek to place upon us constantly, my friend, and you capt...

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We face the changes that transform the very scene and environment around us, Cindy, and you wonderfully depict one such change that I, too, am quite familiar with up here in Alaska, Ma'am.

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A trip of major significance, Stella, where the mind and heart are given a ride back through those yore-tinged times, Ma'am. The construction of this write is brilliantly done so that we feel we, too, are aboard that train, going where it is we must travel.

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Exquisite flow, so delicately laid out in stunning verse, Karin. A true treasure to read and feel, Ma'am.

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...and thank you, Stella, for this awesome post, my friend!

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Wow! I am digging the music/video, Stella. Most excellent...and who can't help but feel exuberant after listening to the song and reading this fantastic post, Ma'am. So....carrot cake or German chocolate for the cake today? I'm leaving the decision in the hands of my most-capable wife. Whatever she ...

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Cindy, I absolutely love Mexican food...my all-time favorite kind of food in the world, for sure! And now I am craving some tacos, enchiladas, and some chile verde, Ma'am.

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You capture well the feeling of absence when someone intimate with us passes on, Sandra. I cannot help but think that this is referring to a pet, perhaps? The raising of the voice whenever "marauders" would invade the treeline makes me think of how my own pets raise the alarm at home whene...

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Ha! A fun read, to be sure, Tom. Indeed, that has to be the biggest wave ever recorded, sir.

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Great flow to this wonderful write, Joseph. We truly experience the seasons as we progress through life, indeed.

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The startling beauty of the scene is well worth remembering, Fay. During our Alaskan winters, we are given such spectacular views involving snow, ice, sunshine, northern lights, etc. The experience is priceless..."no paper / money could ever buy" such grandness, Ma'am. A gem of a poem, my ...

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A most saddening thing, Sandra...to be robbed of one's memories and mental faculties, yet to still feel the confusion and fear associated with knowing that something is terribly wrong. How chilling it must be, Ma'am.

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Thank you, Stella, for providing the link to his writings, Ma'am. I shall certainly make time to peruse his works, my friend. God bless you.

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It takes one's breath away to realize just how much beauty we have missed, and the potential of missing even more soul-searing beauty due to circumstance and happenstance, Cindy. Nonetheless, we should celebrate that the world contains such an abundance of creativity and a wealth of such stunning be...

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We are created in a certain fashion, and yet folks contend with and against those things that we were given at birth instead of being content in who and what they are, Sandra. As the father so wisely notes, true beauty comes from within and is the most important. The sooner folks realize this, the h...

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One's perspective and view on even the seeming mundane things in life can be so telling, Nishu. Perhaps it does point to a heart condition, as you make mention, for his was surely closed off and shut down, and he is left to suffer because of it, Ma'am.

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That feeling of being alone comes through so clearly through this write, Stella. The desire for sleep to come so that we can bathe in the memories of the one we are missing, and yet the night almost seems to hold back the sleep we so long for. Beautiful write in a wonderful format, Stella.

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A great feel given through this write on that seeming search for self we all take to, Sandra...until we realize that we've been in possession of what we've been searching for all along, Ma'am...or that is has been available to us most, if not, all the time we were searching.

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It is freedom, indeed, Fay...this gift of writing, of penning one's soul and heart. We are sometimes smothered by all that is going on around us, and by those who surround us, Ma'am. A bit of 'Me' time, spent with pen and paper, can dramatically free us from the stresses that abound.

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A sad-tinged write, but done with much majesty, Joseph. Associating the dam with this elderly gentleman is a stroke of genius. How we are worn down and made tired by life. Nostalgic, yet this telling is conveyed with dignity, sir. Well done.

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What an absolutely fantastic write this is, Karin, and congratulations to Stella at the birth of a darling new granddaughter. May Stephen and his wife be blessed by this miracle that the Lord has given them. What a happy day, indeed!

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You have not only seized the day, dear Fay, but have seized my admiration for the high skill you use to bring this before us, Ma'am. Glorious and grand penning!

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I believe I've seen this form used before, though I cannot recall it being put to use in such an extravagant and beautiful way, Karin. You thrill us with the observations made and excite us through the beautiful descriptiveness given, Ma'am. A sheer joy to read this uplifting and gorgeous write!

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Well, I wish Pat the Happiest Birthday ever, too. God bless you, Ma'am, and may you enjoy many more to come.

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Clever, my friend. The cutting away of the physical tie that once bound Mummy to child is abrubt and quickly healed...emotional ties between the two can last a lifetime, however, Denys.

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You convey so well the ravenous-seeming nature of pain, Cindy, whether it be due to a physical ailment or a pang of the heart, Ma'am.

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Ouch, indeed! I was unlucky enough to have my four wisdom teeth pulled while stationed overseas....and the dentist was none to gentle and none too caring about how he approached, and proceeded, to rip those teeth away, Sandra. I certainly hope you heal up quickly and never have to go through such a ...

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A comforting and touching write, Nishu. Just knowing that another has your best interest at heart and is always available gives a person a warm and secure feeling.

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A sad and disconcerting end that holds much pain, Tom. Not all stories end happily, I fear, but the beautiful love he had for his wife is not negated by that sad ending, sir. A heart-wrenching write, indeed.

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Another who can bring to us such a feeling of peacefulness and beautiful calm is a blessing, indeed, Stella. A gorgeous write this is, Ma'am.

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