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by Adette
Sun Oct 16, 2016 9:00 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Broken Trust
Replies: 6
Views: 9136

Re: Broken Trust

So agree Stella and have altered my previous lines sometimes miss out letters due to the blindness in left eye I really will have to double check - it looks right 1st time round
by Adette
Sun Oct 16, 2016 5:29 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Never Certain
Replies: 1
Views: 6412

Re: Never Certain

Beautiful words makes one want to sit at early dawn and watch the sun about to rise
also notice that poetry does not have to rhymne its meaning is sufficient.
by Adette
Sun Oct 16, 2016 5:23 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Broken Trust
Replies: 6
Views: 9136

Re: Broken Trust

Though people have I doubt it - the world would collapse we need love
dont we? Some people who have been together for years and years
cannot bear to be apart and have been known to die of a broken heart
by Adette
Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:54 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Mirror, Mirror
Replies: 4
Views: 7597

Re: Mirror, Mirror

Thank you so much Karin old age comes to those who are lucky and that is better than the alternative but we all have our pride and want to look our best - and why not? Thanks for visiting as Stella knows I am miore free write than poetry we all feel and think differently.
by Adette
Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:47 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Mirror, Mirror
Replies: 4
Views: 7597

Re: Mirror, Mirror

Ah Ah yes always chose the one with the better image before leaving the house. But we have reached old age some people do not have the luxory so I am not complaining my main wish is health like I am certain it is for you.
by Adette
Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:44 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Blind Begger
Replies: 2
Views: 5921

Re: The Blind Begger

Thank you s'tella I realise it does not flow (another free write) but this has a meaning for me.
Not all beggers are true though which spoils if for those who have had their lives shattered.
by Adette
Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:41 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: CLIFF OF LONGING
Replies: 2
Views: 5880

Re: CLIFF OF LONGING

As Stella says WOW one has to be a true poet to bring to the fore emotions feeling like these
such a fantastic write Karin
by Adette
Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:35 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Music Played ~ trijan refrain
Replies: 4
Views: 8828

Re: The Music Played ~ trijan refrain

Oh how beautiful Stella one could almost hear the music and feel relaxed - oh music the food of the soul love it.
by Adette
Fri Oct 14, 2016 11:09 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Mirror, Mirror
Replies: 4
Views: 7597

Mirror, Mirror

http://i67.tinypic.com/2mfi061.jpg They say the mirror never lies but I think it tells big porky pies that cannot be me and I should know It’s more like my mother and she’s passed on Mirror, mirror on the wall where is the girl I once knew? who’s that woman staring back at me? It’s some kind of ref...
by Adette
Fri Oct 14, 2016 5:12 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: “Only me” ~ tanka
Replies: 3
Views: 7570

Re: “Only me” ~ tanka

Have to admit never heard of tanka - that is where I go wrong never heard of the phrases I am basically 'Free verse' But I was correct what I write is not to the standard of the people on your site., and does not sit comfortable with them, but I am not a true poet in the sense of the word. Will do a...
by Adette
Fri Oct 14, 2016 1:03 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Safe Snuggled in my Cottage Nook
Replies: 7
Views: 9420

Re: Safe Snuggled in my Cottage Nook

This was amazing loved every stanza - so relaxing loved it
by Adette
Thu Oct 13, 2016 10:10 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Blind Begger
Replies: 2
Views: 5921

The Blind Begger

http://i66.tinypic.com/ea5chz.jpg His mind held many pictures Memories of haunted years A past embedded forever Silent are his tears Tauntingly they jibe Begger man why is it you have no eyes Were you punished for telling lies? Beggar man with your dirty stick Clothes so ragged they do not fit Wher...
by Adette
Tue Oct 11, 2016 7:58 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2015 - Don't Dwell In The Past
Replies: 4
Views: 7911

Re: 2015 - Don't Dwell In The Past

Wonderfully written without going into too much detail it tell its own story
We can not re-live our past that book is closed let it stay that way.
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 7:12 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Apart ~ Fibonacci
Replies: 2
Views: 7511

Re: Apart ~ Fibonacci

wow roses bending to kiss each others buds so delicate and refreshing - like the bloom of youth when capturing it first kiss - love the way you have portrayed the lines.
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 7:08 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)
Replies: 4
Views: 7633

Re: Absence (A Mirror Oddquain)

How delightful this poem it speaks volumes in so few words and the picture image is just so cute
the beauty and tranquility of a child is quite breathtaking - loved it
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 5:16 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Grandpa 1891-1918
Replies: 0
Views: 15235

Grandpa 1891-1918

[b] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=baY5RXbUVDo GRANDPA - DANIEL Inhumane suffering A soldiers soul Shorteness of life Wages of war Dreaming I walk with you through Willow Park Humming softly with the larks Sitting content beneath the big oak tree Granpa - that's how life should have been In my...
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:39 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Spring's Magic.
Replies: 3
Views: 6345

Re: Spring's Magic.

:) Loved this write spring is such a wonderful time winter passes and the buds of spring peep through it is a beautiful time of year. Really enjoyed
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:34 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Caress ~ haibun
Replies: 3
Views: 8621

Re: The Caress ~ haibun

So much emotion as if you are reaching out with both arms to keep the picture forever in you heart and as if from a dream you wake. A lovely write enjoyed it so much - and the picture was awesome
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:26 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Fluttering Autumn Leaves
Replies: 4
Views: 9935

Re: Fluttering Autumn Leaves

Beautiful picture which captures the spirit of Autumn and as one reads its as if they to are singing to the rustle of the leaves. Loved it
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 1:22 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Faraway
Replies: 3
Views: 9207

Re: Faraway

How lovely but how sad memories floating through the mind and somehow the rain seemed to add a kind of softness - a bitter sweet poem
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 12:15 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Sweet Surrender
Replies: 1
Views: 5067

Sweet Surrender

http://i63.tinypic.com/29m3wok.gif Why did I go there? bare my soul to humankind expressing mirth words unkind without the fulfilment My heart desired Was I misguided? Shadowed by darkness While awaiting the love My heart desired Free me from sadness give me the strength to hold my head high smile ...
by Adette
Mon Oct 10, 2016 12:05 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Silent Tears
Replies: 0
Views: 15289

Silent Tears

[b] http://i67.tinypic.com/1553ns7.jpg Pure as pearl drops from an ocean shell Crystal like tear drops silently fell Today was my wedding day Why did he turn away A thousand times I asked Yet no answer came my way My heart hammered sounds Like the beatings on a drum my world has been shattered I can...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:49 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: One Day
Replies: 0
Views: 15324

One Day

http://i68.tinypic.com/21o3aeh.gif Walking silently Within our land of dreams Lush green valleys Carpet our feet Rainbows decorate crystal skies Cascading over oceans Their beauty reflecting ripples on a clear blue sea Souls unite we are as one Awakened by the setting sun And birds in morning praye...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:37 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: On a Pedestal
Replies: 0
Views: 15036

On a Pedestal

http://i63.tinypic.com/24x0191.jpg He's put me on a pedestal Is it me that he can see? Murmuring his sweet nothings He's flattered to be with me Please remove the pedestal Its not deserved of me Truly it is very pleasing But on a pedestal I will not be I really am quite smitten ~ alas Flatt...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:24 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Emotions
Replies: 0
Views: 15286

Emotions

http://i64.tinypic.com/1qpll1.jpg Oh truth don’t hinder me with yet more lies Free my heart ~ bring my soul to life Emotions stirring once more alive The fear of being hurt Brings me no gain ~ so why Do I torture myself And cause myself pain I cry out for love so long denied Yet when it smiles on m...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:12 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Lost Love
Replies: 0
Views: 15242

Lost Love

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ElF1UiL55O4 The breaking of broken glass Shattered like my heart you walked away in silence without a backward glance Loves ever enfolding dream planned for eternity thrown away like ashes into the waves of the sea Searching my soul my mistake? life’s trials life’s m...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 10:47 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Addition to Broken Trust-Broken Love
Replies: 1
Views: 4471

Re: Addition to Broken Trust-Broken Love

Thank you for your visit, yes so much truth written within out words, and love casn be wonderful, but oh my can it hurt.
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 4:40 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Addition to Broken Trust-Broken Love
Replies: 1
Views: 4471

Addition to Broken Trust-Broken Love

http://i63.tinypic.com/2chmb20.jpg The sadness of your camouflaged smile Do you not realise I see beyond the guise Tears flowing behind soft eyes A heart now broken by deception and lies He is unworthy of the tears you cry Your heart shattered ~ pierced by his goodbye One day you will realise The c...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 4:18 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: You Hold my Heart
Replies: 0
Views: 15169

You Hold my Heart

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P56KQv4J76U My heart melts within your touch softly you caress my cheek whispering tender words I Love You You play the game to perfection temptation burning the flame Yearnings entering my dream wild kisses sweetly given Bringing sensations of ecstasy Purity loves s...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 12:39 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Don't Shut me Out
Replies: 0
Views: 15147

Don't Shut me Out

Don’t shut me out ~ or shatter my dreams Don’t close your eyes ~ to what might have been Love me is all I ask Your pain so deep ~ the wound is raw Your suffering ~ divide ~ share with me The future is ours ~ let it take its course The past is gone ~ buried in remorse Don’t hide away ~ come with me ...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:48 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Blue Heather Fields - Italian Sonnet
Replies: 4
Views: 6997

Re: Blue Heather Fields - Italian Sonnet

As I read this thinking of beautiful blue heather, I also read of sadness which I trust is not in your heart. We write so much of our feelings the bitter hurt if I am reading you wrongly accept my apologies, if sadness lies there free yourself and find that happiness which you deserve. It has taken ...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:35 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Together Again
Replies: 0
Views: 15234

Together Again

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DFzTWhb0We8 The moon danced, stars shone bright Twinkling in the midnight sky The softest wind hushed a lullaby A Serenade of love into the night A ray of sunshine enters my soul Giving me hope a new way of life You have become my world Love of my hearts sweet desire...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:16 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Meditation ~ double etheree
Replies: 1
Views: 5547

Re: Meditation ~ double etheree

Even before one starts to read there is complete calmness within the picture. Our minds are always bogged down with this and that, clearing the rubbish is not always easy but a welcome release once we have learned to relax. A lovely poem which made me think.
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 11:10 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Blue Glass
Replies: 3
Views: 5981

Re: Blue Glass

For a free site it is very good - yes WN has that little extra for PRO members but free members don't get half what you offer. But then PRO payments are not going through as a free site it's of no interest to me and lots more people who have made endless complaints. Not certain if people on here lik...
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 10:54 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Cupids Bow
Replies: 2
Views: 4924

Re: Cupids Bow

:) In all honesty married on the rebound (as they say) it was my biggest mistake - it's no good regretting what's done is done. Guess many things we write are connected to our past. Thanks for your visit Stella much appreciated.
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 10:45 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: My Little Angel
Replies: 2
Views: 4862

Re: My Little Angel

It was written for my 1st gt granddaughter for her 1st birthday and wanted her to know it was special just for her - Amelia Lillie
by Adette
Sun Oct 09, 2016 10:40 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Beauty of the World
Replies: 2
Views: 5038

Re: The Beauty of the World

Thank you Stella, made a hic in the coding. Yes me too love all the oldies.
Once I have written a poem can never remember it afterwards, some people
seem to have the gift of being able to repeat theirs.
by Adette
Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:36 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Blue Glass
Replies: 3
Views: 5981

Blue Glass

http://i66.tinypic.com/30rmipt.gif Mesmerised my eyes take in their beauty Each unique with its own special charm Exquisite blue crystal Opulent rich Designed to give pleasure Enlighten the senses Unfolding desire Shimmering of candles Veiling light Tiny fragments of gold adding magic to the night ...
by Adette
Sat Oct 08, 2016 5:09 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Cupids Bow
Replies: 2
Views: 4924

Cupids Bow

http://i66.tinypic.com/2pzmdtl.jpg Walking down lover’s lane Where memories of my past remain Carved upon that big old tree Cupids bow for Jim and me Signed with love for the world to see Oh the sweetness of innocent youth Just how foolish it now seems Locked in our hearts Broken promises shattered...
by Adette
Sat Oct 08, 2016 4:55 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: 2016 - A Prayer for Peace and Tranquility
Replies: 3
Views: 6859

Re: 2016 - A Prayer for Peace and Tranquility

Says so much - a lovely poem that would touch the soul of is all
by Adette
Sat Oct 08, 2016 11:14 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: My Little Angel
Replies: 2
Views: 4862

My Little Angel

http://i63.tinypic.com/eth3es.gif My Little Angel She sits in wonder The innocence of a child Watching the butterfly Skip over the waters tide Telltale images quiver by Dressed prettily for her birthday So delightful, so cute The wonder of a child As if painted in a book Tomorrow her birthday A ver...
by Adette
Sat Oct 08, 2016 10:47 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Broken Heart
Replies: 2
Views: 6076

Re: Broken Heart

Thank you so much
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 11:17 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Smile ~ double etheree
Replies: 3
Views: 8153

Re: Smile ~ double etheree

:) A lovely write and so clever in its form suits the words so well - lovely
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 9:04 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: The Beauty of the World
Replies: 2
Views: 5038

The Beauty of the World

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnFIWZGSoNM [/center][/color] http://i65.tinypic.com/1zo9npc.jpg Hidden way beyond the galaxy Lies a world I've never seen But on awakening ask myself Was it real or make believe? I've been here before Such peace and tranquility fills every pore Yes I've been here be...
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 7:14 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: How can you not believe?
Replies: 5
Views: 8401

Re: How can you not believe?

This was stunning so much truth within your lines - loved it and agree with all you say.
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 6:34 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: But The Flowers
Replies: 8
Views: 10335

Re: But The Flowers

Autumn leaves with winter peeping through pretty soon it will pass and snowdrops will flutter through.
Lovely poem giving lots of thought loved it - thank you for sharing
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:36 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Forever There
Replies: 8
Views: 9800

Re: Forever There

This was so beautiful it touches the heart - have to admit I know nothing about iambic pentameter or iambic etc just write from the heart how I feel at the time, not a true poet in the sense of the word but find pleasure from writing, and reading. Singing is my great love. Excuse mistakes on last po...
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:27 pm
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Sipping On Roses
Replies: 11
Views: 13156

Re: Sipping On Roses

What a lovely thought like a sip of wine - truly well written Image
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:15 pm
Forum: Introduce yourself
Topic: New Member
Replies: 4
Views: 15531

Re: New Member

Welcome Shelley cerrtain you will love it - I am also new and finding my way around.
by Adette
Fri Oct 07, 2016 9:53 am
Forum: Community Poems
Topic: Broken Trust
Replies: 6
Views: 9136

Re: Broken Trust

Thank you again for visiting my site - off to the hospital now, will read some of your poetry once I am home.

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