Just For You Poetry

Cindy

Thank you.

Cindy

Thank you.

Cindy

Gray Clouds gathered in the sky
Gray Clouds, gray clouds, up so high

Clumsy gray clouds dropping rain
On our heads and streets again

Watching gray clouds as they roll
Across the sky from here below

Careless gray clouds, so I'm finding
...Each forgot it's silver lining.

Cindy

Thank you.

Cindy

This makes me think of one of my favorite songs by Building 429 (I think). I don't know what the actual title is for sure, but some of the words are "All I know is I'm not home yet...This is not where I belong. Take this world, but give me Jesus..This is not where I belong." Love your poem.

Cindy

This is a very moving poem. Heartbreaking, yet hopeful.

Cindy

This is a lovely sonnet. Haunting, as Karin says. I love it.

Cindy

Up from the ground rose the mist last night Up from the ponds and streams Drawn by the stars and the pale moonlight Lured by the call of dreams Up from the ground it rose and swelled Into the night it swirled Borne by a promise the darkness held Between and around, it curled There 'neath the stars a...

Cindy

Lovely poem. It feels peaceful.

Cindy

Very beautiful.

Cindy

The tragedy in Paris takes my breath away. I don't understand the people responsible. They are definitely psychopaths. This is a very beautiful poem and call for prayer.

Cindy

Very beautiful.

Cindy

This poem is a great encouragement. Lovely.

Cindy

It's lovely the way you describe the changing of the seasons. Beautiful poem.

Cindy

This is very warm and beautiful.

Cindy

Very beautiful.

Cindy

This is so beautiful. I love the style and your choice of words. They work well together. I love it.

Cindy

Whispers dart back and forth like mice
Timid creatures
Hiding behind cupped hands
Accompanied by smug smiles

Only the pointed looks cross the room
...Too close for comfort.

Cindy

A very moving and beautiful prayer.

Cindy

This is a wonderful poem and a great reminder to be compassionate. Truly, what is a soul without compassion?

Cindy

This is a great inspiration. It makes me feel that there is possibilities just waiting for me.

Cindy

I just love looking at the sky at night. I often wish I had a telescope. Lovely poem.

Cindy

Wonderful poem and tribute. Making a living on the ocean is dangerous, but those that do seem to have fascinating lives. I loved the images.

Cindy

Silence rolls and pillows Beneath the trees It gathers in the thicket like cotton Between the calls of an owl It settles on every branch Between each chirp of a cricket It collects like dew on blades of grass It clusters about random stones like moss Flowing through leaves in a chorus of whispers Ho...

Cindy

Nicely written. I love the idea of building a tower of unbreakable hope. A wonderful image.

Cindy

Time does pass way too quickly. This is a beautiful poem.

Cindy

Very nice. I love trees, but I have never seen a sequoia. I would love to some day.

Cindy

Nice poem. I like the words "linking of two hearts" - a great image. Enjoyed the poem very much.

Cindy

I believe this is so true. Very good.

Cindy

This is a beautiful poem. With great advice too.

Cindy

Yes, we would all like to be remembered. I like this poem.

Cindy

This is a very lovely tribute.

Cindy

Great advice.

Cindy

Thank you for such an inspiring poem.

Cindy

This is very pretty. I like the line - "on the winters of my walk." Nice.

Cindy

Oh! Please tell me you woke up and it was only a dream!

Cindy

It shines out from the face that I haven't seen in years The distance between "now" and "then"... It glares like the sun Blinding and sharp We speak almost as strangers "Then" is all we know of one another A far away place and time We talk a while Standing on different ...

Cindy

I love this. Very fun to read.

Cindy

I'll be coming home again I'll walk that gravel lane Between the waving fields of wheat Come mountain, sea, or pain Where dew drops string themselves like pearls Along each blade of grass And crickets sing sweet lullabies As balmy breezes pass Where my wishes wait for me And all my dreams come true ...

Cindy

I love the image that the last two lines create. Sounds like a soothing place to walk.

Cindy

Autumn is my favorite time of year. I very much enjoyed your poem.

Cindy

I don't think I ever would have thought to compare a love affair with a tube of toothpaste, but it's a very good comparison. Clever.

Cindy

Wonderful poem. I love the second to last stanza. The perfect description of writing poetry.

Cindy

This is a very beautiful prayer.

Cindy

I love the poem and the form you chose. Very nice!

Cindy

This is beautiful too. I love your poem of autumn. It is my favorite season.

Cindy

As Stella said, this is very beautiful.

Cindy

Wonderful poem. Poetry comes from deep in the soul and, as you say, isn't written for fame or money. I feel we write, because we must...like breathing.

Cindy

Like this poem of an old man. Kind of sad.

Cindy

Very beautiful poem. I too like the form.

Just For You Poetry

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