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Fay Slimm

What a wonderful welcome for Stella's new grand daughter is this duo of music and words Karin - congratulations to Stephen and family on the birth of their beautiful baby.

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https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2121/2272175542_3eb44d14b4_q.jpg Today, dreams left behind I fall awake, still dozed I oust myself out of dark-doldrums, pummeling eyes and promise the sun to visit new campion just birthing its buds up on the heath. Today I will reach heights above windy ridges of mi...

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https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2409/2471137685_b42f8da021_q.jpg Dappled sky, white-ruffled and fluffed like meringue pie trapped in cold oven. Streaked twilight night-stained and greying like unbaked rye cake pierced by fine rain. Wind-sheeted shore wet-slaked and changing like long-boiled water me...

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Many happy returns of your special birthday dear Pat - - sending you hugs and very best wishes. xxxxx from Fay

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My dear friend the read made me shudder - you are so so brave. Hugs for sharing this ordeal with us.

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Ah - -- what a wonderful surprise - - and my name sung in that birthday message too - - thank you so much Stella - i shall be humming this greeting all day long......... love and hugs always - - from Fay xxxxxxxxxx

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https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7431/11654142204_e4ba209e1a_n.jpg The picture is called "Writer's Block" and inspired the following few lines. From the first finger of misty light fresh rays from day's entrance shatter black chains imperceptibly. Breeze stirs dark's dregs to a ...

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An excellent read - this has to be one of your best Cindy - totally absorbing from the first line.

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A lovely tribute to a peaceful home and very well crafted - a pleasure to read Seema.

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Oracles whisper to beggars or nobles, pilgrims or poets, all can clearly hear words un-uttered. Tongues of angels declare such reality to those who most need expressions from worlds as yet unseen. This is no illusion, un-worded speech like spears of pure light renews each ear listening for Paradise....

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https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4132/5040259637_4e3c748eaf_n.jpg Night winks and over its eyelash verge saunters the moon, half-hidden in star-spangles merging with darkening womb. Hugely alluring to numberless shoals of flight-followers her orbed light guides unerringly those searching tomorrows. M...

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I have never made a snow-angel yet Dorothy - -here we rarely get but a smattering but your grand haiku has just given me another great resolution for a winter break soon in the white Highlands. Laughing with you my friend.

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Welcome to this friendly site Jan - - a well-crafted verse which tells the story of my week at times. Look forward to reading more of your posts.

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A perfect appeal to a loved one which, filled as it is with imagery to sigh for will surely get you the ear you deserve dear friend. A wonderful read..

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https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2873/9334380632_0f648467d4_n.jpg Spangled with countless stars the tree of night's wisdom leaves inner spaces, embarks on exposing its vista to efforts of parting black from pale, birthing bits of blood-pink rays to start day's fresh growth from distant forest...

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A splendid form and you master it perfectly Stella. Brilliant alliteration too.

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A first class and very engaging verse dear Dorothy - - poems can be seen by a dreamer in all walks of life - a truly delightful read.

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The precision you use in this beautifully sad verse is exquisite dear friend - - your penning of shadow sonnets is second to none dear Karin. Tearfully beautiful but a delightful read.

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Joseph this brings back stories my parents told me of the courage and comradeship shared with your country to bring to heel the evil fermenting in Europe then. Thank you for the clear scene you painted with your poetic pen - may we never forget the bravery shown by yourself and your comrades back th...

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A bouquet of wonderful imagery on winter which will leave every reader with quiet delight in your portrayal of iced beauty. Thank you Stella for another lovely read.

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A wonderful tribute to woman which outlines with honesty the treasured place all females have in the human race - thank you dear Joseph for this delightfully engaging read.

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https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7233/7315815910_0538ce033d_n.jpg Oh land of my habitation, your roots all seasons beautify while you like covered salutation most comfortably in winter lie prostrate in your nakedness, ice-bellied at times but sheltered your limbs dilate in anticipation of early Sprin...

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A truly wonderful array of uplifting thoughts in this gem of a write - thank you Seema for all those helpful suggestions.

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A wintery feel to this warming read Pat - welcome to Just For You poetry - so good to see you posting here on this friendly site.

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Heart-moving write Dorothy. May your 2015 bring you blessings to compensate for earlier sadness.

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https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7494/15648844049_fbeca3b3e1_n.jpg The pulsating spectacular radiance of rainbow allure with willing consent takes cold weather long wait to see New Year arriving, firey and brilliant. Rapt describes that glitzy abandon of crowds addicted to bright prismatic flares dre...

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https://farm6.staticflickr.com/5602/15437996368_c48a57c865_n.jpg As morning trembles on the edge of time we sit on bent grass and wind-dried heather tracing the coming of dawn. Like eyes each disc of light assails in-coming shoreline to scatter shadows in wavelets as a high tide approaches. Pulsate...

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Oh what a lyrical and flowing read with plenty of wry humour included- - -thank you for posting here Joseph and a warm welcome to this friendly siet - - I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

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A truly amazing poem on real love - - to say it is romantic is dishonouring the devotion I read in each of these lines Richard - - love such as this is eternally true and thank you for sharing it here with us my friend. May you and your beloved enjoy a very Happy New Year.

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A lovely description of wintery beauty Dorothy - - may I extend a warm welcome to this comfortable site - it is so good to see you posting your work here. Happy New Year dear friend.

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A heartfelt lament for a lost friend - your words full of tenderness and admiration make a fitting tribute to a dear soul who fought bravely - may she now rest in peace . Condolences to you and her family too.

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You sum them up well Steve - - ha ha - loved that last move he made to get readers eh .

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To our dear, long-time friend Karin - - -Congratulations on your special day - - May it open another year of happy moments with many more blessings in store - HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO A VERY SPECIAL LADY. - - - and thank you Sandra for this caring reminder.

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Haha - this raised a loud giggle before I realized the dangers in some cyber-mating - your use of humour is astounding Sye so I'm sure you will never end up like that funny last line describes. A wonderful read.

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A pair of real cuties your grandchildren my friend and the poem you wrote for them must thrill them to pieces. A really lovely read.

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That owl had it worked out correctly methinks and feathered friends please take heed.- -another smile from your witty mind Steve.

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You portray the holy occasion so well Stella - - a peaceful feeling caresses the senses after reading this lovely verse. Thank you for the wonderful accompaniment too.

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Oh such a sad end to a pretty bird - - your witty rhymes are always second to none Steve - - great read.

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https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7046/13413885545_4e305ea009_n.jpg Patterned now with reflected peace, surface calmed in an over-drawn veil, the pool understands illusion needs a tangible face to be contained. No less real, grief-stricken thoughts have a place where troubles impinge no longer, not st...

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Ha ha that surprise ending made me laugh aloud Tom yet the message in those bottles gives its own warning - - all too often the Christmas season is peppered with too many hot toddies and no time for the kids. A sober reminder my friend.

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The slow flow of your tribute to night's Madame Luna describes her white company so very well Tom - -weird but she seems to be whiter in winter. A lovely read.

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I love the smiles Oops makes for readers like me dear Denys.

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https://farm3.staticflickr.com/2253/2077893542_755a3f6dcb_q.jpg Pasts were forgotten, no more were they strangers to each other, yet unknown now to themselves. They stood in awe of what they knew had begun, now outside of time they learnt nothing but new. Senses felt numb until they realized kind f...

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Double pleasure again here my dear friend - - you never cease to amaze with your ability to relate real-life accounts so interestingly - -- your halibun has been received again with the welcome it surely deserves - - a great joy to read the lessons this halibun teaches.

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Am determined to read your other halibun postings dear Sandra - you have such a gift for relating good stories - - -am so pleased to have caught this gem of a write with such a good haiku to teach generosity. A really moving read.

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A wily old visitor is that beguiling Muse dear friend - - this depth of this poem shows though that she came back soon..... a great description of how we all sometimes feel.

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Simply beautiful the gentle words and the number you chose Stella - a pleasure to read and thanks for sharing.

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So sorry you have not been well Cindy - I can relate to what you term Brain-fog and so apt that you posted this poem here - a wonderful assessment of that something which haunts foggy brains - - so pleased' you feel better again now my lovely. Big hugs from Fay xx

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Reading the adventures of Oops always puts a wide smile on my face Denys - a great character idea - love that last line.

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I feel every line in this well-crafted verse of regret for lost trust when love hurts enough to produce mascara -tears. An exceptional piece Sye and thank you for sharing it.

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