Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

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stevenstirk
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Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby stevenstirk » Fri Apr 10, 2015 10:27 pm

On May the 7th I'll cast a vote
And wear my patriotic coat
As earnestly I take the box
In blue and white and red striped socks

And there , my truest cross I'll mark
As every parliamentary shark
Shall tell of all they'll hence achieve
Whilst laughing up a crooked sleeve

I'll think; I'll muse; oft scratch my head
At every lie that each one said
I'll grieve;I'll vex ; As each one gloats
Securing hopeless hollow votes

And then with pencil tight in hand
with grimaced face, I simply stand
And contemplate my empty cup
That none who canvas e'er fill up

And negative though be my frown
I rip it up and fling it down
My voters slip shall not secure
Elitist wasters anymore

For none shall know the peoples will
And all shall lie and cheat until
The British democratic door
Shall slam and folk shall vote no more

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Stella
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Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby Stella » Sat Apr 11, 2015 11:55 am

well i just love this rhyming take on our political parties.. :D

there is so much more i want to say..but i doubt i could say it as politely or poetically as you Steven..

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:27 pm

I admire the rhyming couplets too and my favorite line is ''whilst laughing up a crooked sleeve'. Politics are so frustrating and you bring this to the fore with your intelligent witticism once again Steven.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Apr 11, 2015 12:31 pm

Nicely and honestly expressed

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby Joseph Anderson » Sat Apr 11, 2015 6:51 pm

Were you writing about England or America-whatever- you did a mosttruthful and telling job, with all the salient facts I must remember this if and when
I head for my voting precinct again. Excellant exposure-Great rhyme and flow

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Tom Balch
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Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby Tom Balch » Sun Apr 12, 2015 11:22 am

Can only agree with your every word, Steven. If only they could be as honest as you.

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Fay Slimm
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Re: Dave Macaroon and Edmund Millimetre

Postby Fay Slimm » Sun Apr 12, 2015 6:41 pm

With you all the witty way you expose these political fraudsters dear Steve - - a great read as always.


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