For Thee.

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Fay Slimm
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For Thee.

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Sep 21, 2015 9:55 pm

Beneath
fearsome tides of life's shocking seas.
Beside
powerful breakers 'mid unsunk grief.
Between
surprise floods from provocative fate,
Faith, Hope and I,
for thee will be waiting.

Across
time-frosted floors of wet-eyed sighs.
Along
unfulfilled corridors where loss arises.
Astride
destiny's rainbow which heals all pain
Faith Hope and I
for thee will be waiting.

Under
tear's bed where lies angel protection.
Untied
from fear's grip when relief sits ready.
Unbeat
in this place where belief will not fail
Faith, Hope and I
for thee will be waiting.

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Tom Balch
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Re: For Thee.

Postby Tom Balch » Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:44 am

I love the form of this lovely poem , Fay. The imagery of longing shines through in every line.A wonderful piece indeed.

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Cindy
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Re: For Thee.

Postby Cindy » Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:26 am

Very beautiful poem. I too like the form.

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Stella
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Re: For Thee.

Postby Stella » Wed Sep 23, 2015 9:29 am

A beautiful faith poem Fay, full of peace and acceptance...thank you so much for sharing....

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Ratliff
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Re: For Thee.

Postby Ratliff » Wed Sep 23, 2015 4:09 pm

Well crafted refrain really enjoyed the progression from beginning to end

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: For Thee.

Postby Joseph Anderson » Thu Sep 24, 2015 11:16 pm

Deep reverance in this most beautifully scripted poem. Unique and unusual in presentations Especially moving when read aloud

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drllrd74
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Re: For Thee.

Postby drllrd74 » Fri Sep 25, 2015 3:18 am

Wonderful poetry Fay.


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