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For Thee.

Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 9:55 pm
by Fay Slimm
Beneath
fearsome tides of life's shocking seas.
Beside
powerful breakers 'mid unsunk grief.
Between
surprise floods from provocative fate,
Faith, Hope and I,
for thee will be waiting.

Across
time-frosted floors of wet-eyed sighs.
Along
unfulfilled corridors where loss arises.
Astride
destiny's rainbow which heals all pain
Faith Hope and I
for thee will be waiting.

Under
tear's bed where lies angel protection.
Untied
from fear's grip when relief sits ready.
Unbeat
in this place where belief will not fail
Faith, Hope and I
for thee will be waiting.

Re: For Thee.

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:44 am
by Tom Balch
I love the form of this lovely poem , Fay. The imagery of longing shines through in every line.A wonderful piece indeed.

Re: For Thee.

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:26 am
by Cindy
Very beautiful poem. I too like the form.

Re: For Thee.

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 9:29 am
by Stella
A beautiful faith poem Fay, full of peace and acceptance...thank you so much for sharing....

Re: For Thee.

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 4:09 pm
by Ratliff
Well crafted refrain really enjoyed the progression from beginning to end

Re: For Thee.

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2015 11:16 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Deep reverance in this most beautifully scripted poem. Unique and unusual in presentations Especially moving when read aloud

Re: For Thee.

Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2015 3:18 am
by drllrd74
Wonderful poetry Fay.