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Blue Eyes ~ double etheree

Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2015 5:21 pm
by Stella
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Those
deep blue
searching eyes
just steal my heart
each time they find me
they leave me overwhelmed
and transfixed in each moment
would if I could but turn from you
I would run fast to safe night shadows
yet you see through the window of my soul

I feel you kindling love’s flame to burn there
its warmth glows and I am drawn to you
my heartbeats become much too fast
without words we know the truth
this yearning grows so bright
the flame burns stronger
each time you steal
my heart with
deep blue
eyes

© Stella Armour 2014

Re: Blue Eyes ~ double etheree

Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2015 5:41 pm
by Cindy
I love the poem and the form you chose. Very nice!

Re: Blue Eyes ~ double etheree

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2015 5:06 pm
by Ratliff
Unique style enjoyed Always loved blue eyes

Re: Blue Eyes ~ double etheree

Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:37 am
by Karin Anderson
The gorgeous blue eyes in the photo complement your double etheree beautifully. It is a most compelling read, especially the second etheree which I would describe as 'magnetic', as it drew me right in to these deep blue eyes Stella.