Nursery Friends

These are poems created by our community.
User avatar
stevenstirk
Posts: 217
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 1:19 pm
Topics: 57

Nursery Friends

Postby stevenstirk » Tue Sep 29, 2015 5:38 pm

I seed a hugelee spider
On me seeling in the corner
Sittin rightways near Miss Muffett
Woo is sitting by Jack Horner

Eez anging from a single thread
And kwite near to the cubbard
Wear all de doggies bones is kept
By pore old mother Hubbad

I've seed so menny spiders
Mother Hubbads seen em two
She sed she ad less trubbel
When she bort er massiv shoo

I luv de furry storrys
And ecpeshally me mums
mE mait Jack Horner luvs em two
Wen eez not pinchin plums

But Goldiloks is calling
Me for brekfast and she kers
Sheeze pinched three boles of porrige
From three very angree bares

Me mum says maginations
Are the stuff on witch wear fed
And sew me menney frendleeze
live inside me littal head

User avatar
Stella
Site Admin
Posts: 1117
Joined: Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:56 pm
Topics: 247
Location: West Yorkshire, England

Re: Nursery Friends

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 01, 2015 8:25 am

Haha, written in beautiful child-talk..i absolutely loved it because it sounded brilliant as i read it out loud in my Yorkshire accent... :lol:

User avatar
Cindy
Posts: 689
Joined: Fri Nov 07, 2014 5:45 pm
Topics: 75

Re: Nursery Friends

Postby Cindy » Thu Oct 01, 2015 5:31 pm

I love this. Very fun to read.

User avatar
Tom Balch
Posts: 289
Joined: Thu Nov 06, 2014 7:30 pm
Topics: 74
Location: Spain

Re: Nursery Friends

Postby Tom Balch » Mon Oct 05, 2015 6:48 am

`Brilliant fun, brilliantly crafted and wearly enjoid. Lubd it.

User avatar
Seema Chowdhury
Posts: 473
Joined: Wed Oct 29, 2014 7:49 pm
Topics: 217

Re: Nursery Friends

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Thu Oct 08, 2015 3:56 pm

A fun write, nice and interesting

User avatar
ken.brandli
Posts: 91
Joined: Sun Feb 08, 2015 3:41 am
Topics: 15

Re: Nursery Friends

Postby ken.brandli » Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:27 pm

Not even going to try to comment in toddlereeze.....couldn't do it justice the way you do. Love this poem!


Return to “Community Poems”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 30 guests

cron