LOOKING INSIDE.

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Fay Slimm
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LOOKING INSIDE.

Postby Fay Slimm » Tue Sep 29, 2015 9:27 pm

Image

Through the pale pink morning
as autumn day was unfolding
I walked the tidal reach,
bare feet exploring
diamanté grains of golden
sand on dewy beach,

trying to understand
the meaning of soul.

Is it the spirit hiding nearby us,
the core of all things, unseen
explorer who plays at our
edge of knowing,
or some part none of us hold
yet keep half-seen,

an inside "I" that we hope
will live on after we die ?

The silence of answers untold
lapped at my toes as maybe
or might strode into my
questions that day
yet I paddled into the advent
of coming light

shoulders back and eyes
ahead but looking inside.

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Stella
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Re: LOOKING INSIDE.

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 01, 2015 8:17 am

Yes Fay ,"Looking inside" is a beautiful way to find ourselves...the real "I" that is our soul and essence.Where could be a more serene place to be at one with it than walking into the new light of a new day.Beautiful my friend..

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Cindy
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Re: LOOKING INSIDE.

Postby Cindy » Thu Oct 01, 2015 5:15 pm

I love the image that the last two lines create. Sounds like a soothing place to walk.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: LOOKING INSIDE.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Thu Oct 08, 2015 3:59 pm

Superb!!!


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