Early Morning Love

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sanctus
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Early Morning Love

Postby sanctus » Wed Apr 20, 2016 8:35 pm

In the early hours
of the morning, my love,
I am tracing you from memory.
Sharing, once again,
other early mornings;
other laughing moments.
Attempting to
gain perspective.
Hearing that time erases.
I know it does not.
I am seeing you again, my love,
in my daydreams.
I collect pockets of hope
and contribute them
to my understanding.
In the early hours
of my depression, my love,
I am touching you again.
Feeling your splendid smiles
as they wash over me.
In these early hours of alertness
when I can
best
reach into myself for you.
I hear again the tomorrows
that we promised to love.
Now, the morning is upon me
and I am solitary.
I
weep,
but
where
are
the
tears?

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Stella
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Re: Early Morning Love

Postby Stella » Wed Apr 20, 2016 8:48 pm

Early mornings are often a time for reflection and especially of loved ones and precious moments spent with them. No tears but the emotions are there..

A lovely write and welcome to our site dear friend.. :)

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Fay Slimm
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Re: Early Morning Love

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Apr 21, 2016 5:59 pm

Romantic yet filled with sad reflection - a very appealing read Chris. So pleased you are posting here on Just For You Poetry.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Early Morning Love

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Thu Apr 21, 2016 11:19 pm

A lovely and a reflective write

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Cindy
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Re: Early Morning Love

Postby Cindy » Wed Apr 27, 2016 7:32 pm

Very beautiful. I love the ending, because that feeling is familiar to me.


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