You're there.

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drllrd74
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You're there.

Postby drllrd74 » Thu Apr 21, 2016 11:33 pm

I shut my eyes and You are there,
I open them and there You stand;
You can ease my worried care,
the evidence of You is grand.

I see You in the early light,
when shadows lose their hold;
You grace me with Your vivid sight,
that appears, so bright and bold.

I send my troubles off to You,
do with them what You will;
what bothers me, You always knew,
I feel Your presence when I'm still.

Your music fills my empty heart,
with songs from You on high;
You gave to me a brand new start,
and now my tortured soul can fly.

I shut my eyes and You are there,
I open them and there You stand;
You answer all my rightful prayer,
You touch me with Your guiding hand.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: You're there.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Apr 23, 2016 5:49 pm

A tender write, very nicely composed

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Stella
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Re: You're there.

Postby Stella » Sat Apr 23, 2016 7:55 pm

A lovely poem of faith David..

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Cindy
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Re: You're there.

Postby Cindy » Wed Apr 27, 2016 7:27 pm

This poem is very beautifully written. I love the rhymes.


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