Just For Fun

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Cindy
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Just For Fun

Postby Cindy » Wed Jun 15, 2016 11:57 am

Dare to dream of something strange
Mix a matter, rearrange
Just a joke, a wish or two
Tweak a tad of something new
Flip a feeling on its ear
Slip in goofy smiles for cheer
Ahhh...the plays of lazy days.










Form: Rhyming Alliterisen

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Stella
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Re: Just For Fun

Postby Stella » Wed Jun 15, 2016 4:41 pm

This is brilliant and i am beginning to like this alliterisen form, it's sort of addictive.. :D

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Cindy
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Re: Just For Fun

Postby Cindy » Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:51 pm

Thank you. It was fun to write.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Just For Fun

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Fri Jun 17, 2016 3:46 pm

A nice and a fun write, enjoyed reading git today.

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Cindy
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Re: Just For Fun

Postby Cindy » Fri Jun 17, 2016 3:59 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Just For Fun

Postby ShelleyA » Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:29 pm

A beautiful write Cindy. A skillfully crafted rhyming Alliterisen. Perfect form and a fun read. Very nice rhythm. Good rhyming. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that's executed with precision in this piece. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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Cindy
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Re: Just For Fun

Postby Cindy » Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:41 pm

Thank you, Shelley.


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