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Just For Fun
Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2016 11:57 am
by Cindy
Dare to dream of something strange
Mix a matter, rearrange
Just a joke, a wish or two
Tweak a tad of something new
Flip a feeling on its ear
Slip in goofy smiles for cheer
Ahhh...the plays of lazy days.
Form: Rhyming Alliterisen
Re: Just For Fun
Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2016 4:41 pm
by Stella
This is brilliant and i am beginning to like this alliterisen form, it's sort of addictive..
Re: Just For Fun
Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:51 pm
by Cindy
Thank you. It was fun to write.
Re: Just For Fun
Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2016 3:46 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
A nice and a fun write, enjoyed reading git today.
Re: Just For Fun
Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2016 3:59 pm
by Cindy
Thank you.
Re: Just For Fun
Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2016 12:29 pm
by ShelleyA
A beautiful write Cindy. A skillfully crafted rhyming Alliterisen. Perfect form and a fun read. Very nice rhythm. Good rhyming. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that's executed with precision in this piece. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
Re: Just For Fun
Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:41 pm
by Cindy
Thank you, Shelley.