2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy

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Seema Chowdhury
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2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Mon Jun 20, 2016 4:18 pm

Be happy and always bring joy for others
Through kindness and compassion drive
Be positive and optimistic in all you do
And always look at the brighter side of life

Add vibrant flavours and colors my dear
And show love and patience everyday
Search for inner peace and deep tranquility
And surrender to the will of God in the way

Control your self, your body and mind
Count your blessings and listen to your heart
Be calm and collected and take a break
And illuminate your inner light to start

A beautiful day to be happy and rejoice
And show your gratitude to the Gracious Lord
Who has sent you to this Earth to live
And spread seeds of gratitude in even and odd

Just look deep inside and improve yourself
And get insight and new perspective drive
Be positive and happy and try to bring joy
And always look at the brighter side of life.

Happy Birthday Sweet Sisters Sadaf & Sabeen
Love you both very much

Seema Chowdhury
June 21, 2016

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Stella
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Re: 2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy

Postby Stella » Wed Jun 29, 2016 3:15 pm

Lovely words as always ..thank you Seema.. :D

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LorettaYoung
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Re: 2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy

Postby LorettaYoung » Thu Jun 30, 2016 9:07 pm

Beautiful thoughts phrased with excellence. Inspiring. Best Loretta

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Re: 2016 - Be Happy And Bring Joy

Postby ShelleyA » Sat Jul 02, 2016 9:14 am

A beautiful heartfelt write and birthday message. Heartfelt and encouraging. Lovely words of faith. Well crafted verse that I enjoy. Good imagery and descriptives. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Nice use of rhyme. Lovely depth of feeling. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.


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