Springtime ~ palindrome poem

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Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Stella » Fri Jul 01, 2016 2:34 pm

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Springtime in songs
lovely
singing sweetly,
always running prettily
soft rippling streams,
everywhere just sparkling
sunshine of smiles and laughter
displays gorgeous
daffodils dancing delicately.
beautiful is
~ Springtime ~
is beautiful.
delicately dancing daffodils
gorgeous displays
laughter and smiles of sunshine
sparkling just everywhere
streams rippling soft
prettily running always
sweetly singing
lovely
songs in springtime


© Stella Armour
*Palindrome reads the same from top to bottom or bottom to top *

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Cindy » Fri Jul 01, 2016 3:03 pm

I think this is really cool. Pretty too. :-)

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Stella » Fri Jul 01, 2016 3:10 pm

Thank you Cindy , not nearly as difficult as it looks , you start in the middle and work out :D

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Fri Jul 01, 2016 5:20 pm

Another beautiful and a lovely write.

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby LorettaYoung » Sat Jul 02, 2016 12:11 am

This has such beautiful and inspiring imagery; and the form is so beautiful and intricate. It looks very difficult. Great write. Loretta

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby ShelleyA » Sat Jul 02, 2016 9:07 am

Hi Stella. This a beautiful write about springtime and a skillfully crafted palindrome. You make this form look so easy. Vivid imagery. Good color and shading of your words that promote and evoke emotion. You paint a picture that any reader can appreciate. Good flow and line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Stella » Sat Jul 02, 2016 9:22 am

Seema, Loretta and Shelley..thank you for your lovely comments. i have only ever written 2 of these , i love a challenge and this form was a challenge to myself :lol:

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby LorettaYoung » Mon Jul 04, 2016 12:00 am

Stella, Hi, I'm sorry to write here, but I can't figure out how to send you a PM and I have a message for you. Best Loretts *rose*

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Stella » Mon Jul 04, 2016 2:00 am

Hi Loretta... your message boxes should be top right hand side of your page , next to notifications.. :)

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby zephyrwords » Mon Jul 04, 2016 11:32 pm

OHH. This is lovely, Stella. I will try one! Hope you are well!
Colleen

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Re: Springtime ~ palindrome poem

Postby Stella » Tue Jul 05, 2016 8:44 am

Thank you Colleen... please do write one of these, they are fun :)


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