Sipping On Roses

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Cindy
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Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Mon Jul 04, 2016 4:18 pm

Roses drenched in pink are best
For eyes all parched from snow
The journey into Summer Land
Is arduous and slow

The petals glisten fresh with pink
They quench the thirsting eye
The healthy glow of lip and cheek
A hunger satisfies

Eyes guzzle at the fountain, brisk
Of blossoms, reckless pink
To saturate this appetite
There is no better drink

My arid eyes now doused in blooms
A tippler, I must be
So greedy, I still drink them up
There's not enough for me.
Last edited by Cindy on Mon Jul 04, 2016 7:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Mon Jul 04, 2016 7:03 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Stella » Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:23 am

what a lovely thought Cindy, to sip on Roses and how sweet and delicious the Rose is.

A lovely flow to your words and much enjoyed imagery.. i can almost taste the beauty :D

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Tue Jul 05, 2016 2:17 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby ShelleyA » Tue Jul 05, 2016 7:37 pm

A lovely write about summertime. Vivid imagery. Lovely flow and tone. Rhyming is well done. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Tue Jul 05, 2016 9:02 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby zephyrwords » Sat Jul 09, 2016 10:55 am

Drinking in roses.....beautiful.
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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Sat Jul 09, 2016 1:31 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby drllrd74 » Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:30 am

Good write Cindy!

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:40 am

Thank you so much.

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Adette » Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:27 pm

What a lovely thought like a sip of wine - truly well written Image

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Re: Sipping On Roses

Postby Cindy » Sat Oct 08, 2016 1:12 am

Thank you.


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