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Sipping On Roses

Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2016 4:18 pm
by Cindy
Roses drenched in pink are best
For eyes all parched from snow
The journey into Summer Land
Is arduous and slow

The petals glisten fresh with pink
They quench the thirsting eye
The healthy glow of lip and cheek
A hunger satisfies

Eyes guzzle at the fountain, brisk
Of blossoms, reckless pink
To saturate this appetite
There is no better drink

My arid eyes now doused in blooms
A tippler, I must be
So greedy, I still drink them up
There's not enough for me.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2016 7:03 pm
by Cindy
Thank you.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:23 am
by Stella
what a lovely thought Cindy, to sip on Roses and how sweet and delicious the Rose is.

A lovely flow to your words and much enjoyed imagery.. i can almost taste the beauty :D

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 2:17 pm
by Cindy
Thank you.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 7:37 pm
by ShelleyA
A lovely write about summertime. Vivid imagery. Lovely flow and tone. Rhyming is well done. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 9:02 pm
by Cindy
Thank you.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 10:55 am
by zephyrwords
Drinking in roses.....beautiful.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 1:31 pm
by Cindy
Thank you.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:30 am
by drllrd74
Good write Cindy!

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:40 am
by Cindy
Thank you so much.

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:27 pm
by Adette
What a lovely thought like a sip of wine - truly well written Image

Re: Sipping On Roses

Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2016 1:12 am
by Cindy
Thank you.