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Daughters Dance
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2016 11:27 pm
by zephyrwords
Daughters dance like daisy's do,
laugh like lilies, yes it's true.
Smile like sunshine's yellow grin,
bubble boisterous, never grim.
Run like airy summer rain,
rippling like a glad refrain.
Daughter's dance the whole day through.
Daughters Dance
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 2:46 am
by Cindy
Adorable. Love the poem.
Daughters Dance
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 8:49 am
by Stella
Yes, you found the right place Colleen well done
a lovely rhyming alliterisen poem i just love the opening line and i will put the format in our "How to understand poetic forms " under the "How to Guides " section.
Re: Daughters Dance
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 7:45 pm
by ShelleyA
Hi Colleen. A well crafted rhyming Alliterisen. Good imagery and descriptives. Nice use of simile. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well penned and an enjoyable read.
Re: Daughters Dance
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:41 pm
by LorettaYoung
Nice Imagery and alliteration Colleen and a very enchanting picture. Well done. Best Loretta
Re: Daughters Dance
Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 10:39 am
by zephyrwords
Thank you all for your wonderful comments!! ..and what a thrill to have one of my poems used as an example for understanding poetic forms!! I'm honored, Stella!