The Wind of Change

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Stella
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The Wind of Change

Postby Stella » Tue Jul 19, 2016 1:42 pm


The wind
of change
blows
cool and pleasant

Faraway time
drags
hot and humid

Freesia
so fragrant
whispers
over my skin

Mysterious
the haunting
that flows
in chimes
easy echoes
lulling sacred
hearts

so peaceful
the call

Faraway time
has lost
the burden
i breathe
to
find

The wind
of change
blows
cool and pleasant

© Stella Armour 2016

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Cindy
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Re: The Wind of Change

Postby Cindy » Wed Jul 20, 2016 1:36 pm

I can imagine the soothing wind of change that you've written of here. It feels refreshing.

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Re: The Wind of Change

Postby ShelleyA » Fri Jul 22, 2016 1:08 pm

A beautiful write with vivid visuals. Good use of color and shad in your words that promotes and evokes feeling through sight, scent, sound and temperature. Good flow; nice rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Re: The Wind of Change

Postby zephyrwords » Sun Jul 24, 2016 8:06 pm

So lovely! ....it's mesmerizing.
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