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A Summer Day

Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 1:10 pm
by ShelleyA
What a wonderful day,
let's go outside and play;
there is no more to say.

The sky is blue, not gray
and sun shines bright today—
what a wonderful day.

Now summer does convey
its beautiful display,
let's go outside and play.

You won’t be led astray
when having fun your way…
there is no more to say.

Form: Cascade
From: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/cascade.html

Re: A Summer Day

Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2016 6:03 pm
by Stella
A lovely example of the form Shelley and i especially enjoyed how you had written it in mono-rhyme.. :)

Re: A Summer Day

Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2016 12:09 pm
by Cindy
Very fun to read. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme you chose.

Re: A Summer Day

Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2016 8:07 pm
by zephyrwords
A very light and playful tone throughout. Really enjoyed this!

Re: A Summer Day

Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 5:39 pm
by ShelleyA
Thanks Stella, Cindy and Colleen. I appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed it.