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In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2016 9:59 pm
by Cindy
In the early morning light
Across the dewy lawn
I watch as a bunny eats clover
He slipped under the fence
Then timidly hopped
In the early morning light
He looked hungrily
At the wildflowers
Across the dewy lawn
Now I linger over my coffee
And gaze out the window...
I watch as a bunny eats clover.
Form: Cascade
Re: In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2016 10:11 am
by Stella
Aw, lovely images you have painted with your words Cindy and a new form as well...
Re: In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2016 11:27 am
by Cindy
Thank you, Stella.
Re: In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 5:34 pm
by ShelleyA
A lovely write about the adventure of this rabbit in early morning. A skillfully crafted Cascade; perfect form. Vivid imagery. Good color and shading of your words that promotes and evokes emotion. You paint a delightful picture of this scene that any reader can appreciate and see in their mind's eye. Flow and line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
Re: In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 12:41 am
by Cindy
Thank you, Shelley.
Re: In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 10:17 am
by zephyrwords
Very sweet. I love your simple, but beautiful approach in all your poetry, Cindy.
Re: In The Early Morning Light
Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2016 9:19 pm
by Cindy
Thank you very much.