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Moments

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2016 11:29 am
by zephyrwords
Moments
gentle hours, sweet,
innocent and sublime.
When we were green and tender young,
lying in heathered meadows fragrance dear,
swaying softly on fragile stems
within your arms melting
Let's not outrun
moments.

Re: Moments

Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2016 3:42 pm
by Stella
A truly lovely rictameter Colleen, very calm and serene . I love this form and maybe you have inspired me to write a poem also :) :) :)

Re: Moments

Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2016 11:34 am
by Cindy
Beautiful, Collen.

Re: Moments

Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2016 4:42 pm
by Adette
So very sweet and full of memories saying a lot in just a few words - lovely