Then

[Fay Slimm]

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Oh
if ever blessing stalked a late dawn,
brought to each morning excess beauty,
made clandestine contact exciting news,
sought all chances for feeling reborn,
Oh
if ever lovers coveted bliss,
lived for hearing soul-mate voicemail
embedded in time's secret hide-away,
revelled in new unrestrictions,
Oh
if ever candle's nectar-bright
light burned with contented employ,
made coupled grass flat in climax joy,
caressed with care another's life.
Oh
if ever two planned each second
together and made vows to look forward,
felt patience would someday gift reward
of waiting the day, it was then.

[Seema Chowdhury]

Nicely composed, thoughtful and inspiring

[Karin Anderson]

What a creative way to follow though a couple's relationship from secrets to their vows . I feel privileged to have spied their special moments and I just love happy ever afters Fay.

[Stella]

"Then", a time to go back in memory amd re-live all those beautiful, special days on the journey that gave you so much love.

A truly beautiful glimpse into your heart Fay...

[Cindy]

This is so beautifully written. I love your choices of words and the style in which it was written.