Fascination

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Stella
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Fascination

Postby Stella » Fri Sep 16, 2016 9:31 pm

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Woven in wild flower fascination
fragrant late summer meadows
strum the sweetness of viola
strings in softest undertones of
blissful contentment.

Gentle reflections in a stream smile
then slip into a flow of September
sleepiness gracefully until the
evensong of summer is sung and
autumn meadows weave their
own fascinating music.


© Stella Armour 2016

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Cindy
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Re: Fascination

Postby Cindy » Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:28 pm

Beautiful, Stella.

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Re: Fascination

Postby ShelleyA » Mon Oct 03, 2016 2:38 pm

A beautiful write about the autumn season. Melodious and heartwarming. Well crafted verse which I enjoy. Vivid imagery. Good color and shade in your wording that promotes and evokes emotion. You paint a picture that any reader can appreciate. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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Re: Fascination

Postby Adette » Mon Oct 03, 2016 2:57 pm

You are indeed a fine poet and its beauty comes from within your heart. Lovely enjoyed very much. I notice you have also placed a picture and presume this is off google,k if so a good incentive for those who enjoy being creative.

Adette

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Re: Fascination

Postby Stella » Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:04 pm

Thank you Shelley and Cindy... and welcome Adette i uploaded the image i wanted to flickr and then from flickr to here, it needs a little practice but please don't hesitate to contact me if you find it difficult (Also in the how To section)


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