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Fascination
Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2016 9:31 pm
by Stella
Woven in wild flower fascination
fragrant late summer meadows
strum the sweetness of viola
strings in softest undertones of
blissful contentment.
Gentle reflections in a stream smile
then slip into a flow of September
sleepiness gracefully until the
evensong of summer is sung and
autumn meadows weave their
own fascinating music.
© Stella Armour 2016
Re: Fascination
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:28 pm
by Cindy
Beautiful, Stella.
Re: Fascination
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2016 2:38 pm
by ShelleyA
A beautiful write about the autumn season. Melodious and heartwarming. Well crafted verse which I enjoy. Vivid imagery. Good color and shade in your wording that promotes and evokes emotion. You paint a picture that any reader can appreciate. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
Re: Fascination
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2016 2:57 pm
by Adette
You are indeed a fine poet and its beauty comes from within your heart. Lovely enjoyed very much. I notice you have also placed a picture and presume this is off google,k if so a good incentive for those who enjoy being creative.
Adette
Re: Fascination
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:04 pm
by Stella
Thank you Shelley and Cindy... and welcome Adette i uploaded the image i wanted to flickr and then from flickr to here, it needs a little practice but please don't hesitate to contact me if you find it difficult (Also in the how To section)