Can I count on love?

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drllrd74
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Can I count on love?

Postby drllrd74 » Fri Sep 30, 2016 6:13 pm

If I gave my love to you,
would you handle it with care?
would you give it due respect,
can I count it, being there?
If I gave you my tomorrows,
would it happen everyday?
would you tender all my dreams,
on those days when you're away?
Does your love include those moments,
when your hand's enclosed in mine?
when our hearts and souls are one,
not just now, but all the time?
Will you treat our love with truth,
and not deny it with a lie?
and can you be, but honest,
and succeed, not only try?
Then I'll give my love to you,
knowing happiness will reign;
knowing that the days ahead,
our minds will be the same.

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Re: Can I count on love?

Postby ShelleyA » Mon Oct 03, 2016 2:34 pm

A beautiful write about love and what it means in a relationship. Heartfelt and thoughtful. Well crafted rhyming poetry which I enjoy. Good flow and line to line transition and breaks. Very nice rhythm. Rhyming is done well. Lovely depth of feeling. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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drllrd74
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Re: Can I count on love?

Postby drllrd74 » Thu Oct 06, 2016 1:16 am

Thanks ShelleyA

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Stella
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Re: Can I count on love?

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 06, 2016 10:49 am

This has a such a lovely lilt to it that it is almost like a song that Doris Day sang "If i gave my heart to You" so i was singing it really..

A lovely romantic and gentle theme , a pleasure to read

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Re: Can I count on love?

Postby Adette » Thu Oct 06, 2016 7:57 pm

If I give my heart to you will you handle it with care? Beautifull write quite moving and oh ghow many times do those very words go through our heads? Love your poem spells A SOUL MATE we all look but rarely find - lovely rhyme


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