Willowy and beautiful

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Adette
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Willowy and beautiful

Postby Adette » Wed Oct 05, 2016 4:38 pm

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So graceful her perfection
So perfect her pose
So perfect her reflection
So perfect but now she is gone

Was she just a dream
Was she ever mine
Was she my imagination
Was she gone before her time

My heart feels empty
My soul appears lost
My love for her seemed endless
My love forever lost

One day we'll meet again
One day the sun will shine
One day my darling
One day all will be fine

We'll walk the roads together
We'll savour strawberry wine
We''ll dream of tomorrow
We''ll forever be entwined

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Re: Willowy and beautiful

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 06, 2016 11:47 am

How sad yet beautiful are your words, to know that she is not lost for always is a comfort and that your poems conveys an ultimate faith in another time and space beyond this one ♥

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Adette
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Re: Willowy and beautiful

Postby Adette » Mon Jan 23, 2017 11:33 pm

I am guilty of not looking at some comments but not done on purpose but just found that I can make the writing larger before having strain on my eye - I think told you I am blind in one eye - thank you for your words they really help.

B4 I forget which book did you see has it got yellow flowers or are they the large white ones? And how did you know?


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