Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

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Sandra Martyres
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Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Sandra Martyres » Fri Nov 14, 2014 2:12 am

snowbound-
she reads fortunes
in woodfire flames
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white whiskers-
my uncle's
only claim to fame

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floating smoothies -
a small child
reaches for the sky

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Stella
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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Stella » Fri Nov 14, 2014 7:01 pm

i really enjoy the brevity of modern haiku Sandra, and i am sure it is much more difficult to write than is first supposed.

Thank you for these three lovely "white" haiku/senryu poems.. they are delightful.

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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Nov 14, 2014 7:04 pm

White and quite lovely these modern haikus dear SAndra - they seem so easy from your informed pen - I am in awe.

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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sat Nov 15, 2014 4:13 am

Thanks so much Stella and Fay... Haiku is the only thing that I manage to write these days.. My muse has vanished into the wilderness!

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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Tom Balch » Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:03 am

Prompt maybe, perfect definitely. Loved this, Sandra.

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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Cindy » Sun Nov 16, 2014 9:46 pm

Very lovely. I like them.

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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:24 am

You have mastered the haiku/senryu form wonderfully and I love all these with the "white" prompt thank you Sandra.

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Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White

Postby patspoems » Thu Nov 20, 2014 9:05 am

Wonderful examples of the perfect haiku/senyru Sandra.....Pat


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