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Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 2:12 am
by Sandra Martyres
snowbound-
she reads fortunes
in woodfire flames
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white whiskers-
my uncle's
only claim to fame
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floating smoothies -
a small child
reaches for the sky
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 7:01 pm
by Stella
i really enjoy the brevity of modern haiku Sandra, and i am sure it is much more difficult to write than is first supposed.
Thank you for these three lovely "white" haiku/senryu poems.. they are delightful.
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 7:04 pm
by Fay Slimm
White and quite lovely these modern haikus dear SAndra - they seem so easy from your informed pen - I am in awe.
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2014 4:13 am
by Sandra Martyres
Thanks so much Stella and Fay... Haiku is the only thing that I manage to write these days.. My muse has vanished into the wilderness!
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:03 am
by Tom Balch
Prompt maybe, perfect definitely. Loved this, Sandra.
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2014 9:46 pm
by Cindy
Very lovely. I like them.
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:24 am
by Karin Anderson
You have mastered the haiku/senryu form wonderfully and I love all these with the "white" prompt thank you Sandra.
Re: Modern - haiku/ senryu prompt: White
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2014 9:05 am
by patspoems
Wonderful examples of the perfect haiku/senyru Sandra.....Pat