Winters Song

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Adette
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Winters Song

Postby Adette » Wed Oct 19, 2016 9:59 pm




Creeping with a delicate flair
The face of winter
Frosty cold and bare
So delicate she descends
Leaving her mist within the air

You feel her presence
That icy grip ~ frozen fingers
Within the mitts
Shivering from head to toe
Wishing winter soon would go

She glows in her winter charm
Silver tipped icicles newly formed
Snow laden ground at early dawn
The glory of her winter shawl

She is enticingly beautiful
In her own delightful way
Especially when snowflakes
Dance upon my windowpane

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Winters earth a quiet kind of peace
Stilled in a magic all of its own

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Stella
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Re: Winters Song

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 20, 2016 8:36 am

A delicate poem that reminds me of snowflakes gently falling and the video fit the mood you created beautifully.

I loved the closing couplet too :)

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Re: Winters Song

Postby Cindy » Thu Oct 20, 2016 11:58 am

This is a beautiful poem. I love it paired with the video. Great idea!

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Adette
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Re: Winters Song

Postby Adette » Wed Nov 09, 2016 9:10 pm

Just noticed so sorry not to have thanked you both earlier Stella and Cindy - must do some more reading tomorrow eye very tired as
Stella knows the left is completely blind

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Re: Winters Song

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Nov 11, 2016 4:36 am

A lovely atmospheric write and I adore Ronan Keeting and the lovely picture you have provided with the snow falling gently. Such a wonderful presentation Adette.

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Re: Winters Song

Postby Adette » Fri Nov 11, 2016 10:25 pm

THANK YOU KARIN AND DONALD FOR THE LOVELY WORDS YES THE SONG FITS THE POEM JUST RIGHT ONE DOES NOT NEED PICTURE
I AM FINDING A VIDEO MUCH MORE RELAXING AND SO LOVE YOUR MUSIC WHICH I AM PINCHING BY THE SCORE, BUT THEN SO LOVE
MUSIC - IT CALMS THE SOUL


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