Creeping with a delicate flair The face of winter Frosty cold and bare So delicate she descends Leaving her mist within the air
You feel her presence That icy grip ~ frozen fingers Within the mitts Shivering from head to toe Wishing winter soon would go
She glows in her winter charm Silver tipped icicles newly formed Snow laden ground at early dawn The glory of her winter shawl
She is enticingly beautiful In her own delightful way Especially when snowflakes Dance upon my windowpane
Winters earth a quiet kind of peace Stilled in a magic all of its own
Re: Winters Song
Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2016 8:36 am
by Stella
A delicate poem that reminds me of snowflakes gently falling and the video fit the mood you created beautifully.
I loved the closing couplet too
Re: Winters Song
Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2016 11:58 am
by Cindy
This is a beautiful poem. I love it paired with the video. Great idea!
Re: Winters Song
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 9:10 pm
by Adette
Just noticed so sorry not to have thanked you both earlier Stella and Cindy - must do some more reading tomorrow eye very tired as Stella knows the left is completely blind
Re: Winters Song
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2016 4:36 am
by Karin Anderson
A lovely atmospheric write and I adore Ronan Keeting and the lovely picture you have provided with the snow falling gently. Such a wonderful presentation Adette.
Re: Winters Song
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2016 10:25 pm
by Adette
THANK YOU KARIN AND DONALD FOR THE LOVELY WORDS YES THE SONG FITS THE POEM JUST RIGHT ONE DOES NOT NEED PICTURE I AM FINDING A VIDEO MUCH MORE RELAXING AND SO LOVE YOUR MUSIC WHICH I AM PINCHING BY THE SCORE, BUT THEN SO LOVE MUSIC - IT CALMS THE SOUL
