Midnight Swim

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Cindy
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Midnight Swim

Postby Cindy » Thu Oct 20, 2016 2:54 pm

The liquid sky is deep with night
And dark with silence.
It's silky surface is inviting and serene.

Many points of light sparkle.
Scattered like a multitude of stars-
Silver wishes under a tranquil moon.

They flicker and wink in my wake...
I glide through limpid galaxies
Across a pool of moon-glow.

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Re: Midnight Swim

Postby Stella » Thu Oct 20, 2016 5:20 pm

How beautifully serene Cindy. You swim on the tide of moon-glow almost in meditation... oh so lovely :)

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Cindy
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Re: Midnight Swim

Postby Cindy » Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:04 pm

Thank you.

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Re: Midnight Swim

Postby Adette » Fri Oct 21, 2016 10:41 am

When looking at the title shivered hope it was in summer, but on reading
it took on a new meaning and kind of made one feel quite relaxed excellent imaginary.

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Re: Midnight Swim

Postby Cindy » Fri Oct 21, 2016 3:48 pm

Thank you.


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