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Painting Dreams

Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2016 11:29 pm
by Adette



In my mind
pictures cascade like
waterfalls in the darkness of the sky
shimmering decked in silver
halo's touching the earth
with light

flawless images
camouflaged to perfection
my brush can only
whisper across
the page

God in his
wisdom gave each
of us a gift use it wisely was his
only wish

Earthly wonders
have me mesmerised
It seems to have taken
a lifetime for me
to realise

Gifted with a
voice music my inspiration
the paint brush dances with
sweet delight an open
invitation re- creating
my imagination

The wonders of
the Universe - close your eyes
paint your dream
Red, yellow, blue or green
A rainbow within a dream

*****

Re: Painting Dreams

Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 2:04 am
by Karin Anderson
Absolutely superb penning and the colours in the video are stunning. I really like the wisdom 'God in his wisdom gave each of us a gift use it wisely was his only wish' as I know this is so. Your rhyming couplet at the conclusion rounds off your poem beautifully Adette.

Re: Painting Dreams

Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 1:37 pm
by Cindy
This is very beautiful. I love the three line rhyme at the end. Very well done.

Re: Painting Dreams

Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 5:19 pm
by Stella
One of your best poems Adette, this is truly serene and lovely.... :)

Re: Painting Dreams

Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 8:57 pm
by Adette
Thank you Karin, Cindy and Stella so pleased you liked this poem - my dream state mind was at peace lookiing forward to getting
under my new duvet b- lol

Re: Painting Dreams

Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2016 10:16 pm
by Adette
THANK YOU DONALD WILL TRY AND MAKE LARGER FOR THE SAKE OF YOUR EYES - LOVELY TO SEE YOU ON HERE - IT GOES TO SHOW HOW OUR MOOD REFLECTS IN OUR POETRY - GOD BLESS
ANNE