I Knew

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Stella
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I Knew

Postby Stella » Sat Jan 07, 2017 3:41 pm


He made a lonely, soft silhouette
in the doorway
against the bright rising sun,
but i knew the eagerness
of those green eyes still lingered,
that even now blindly facing the light
just one more time
he was again making love with me.
Standing in his own shadow quietly
staring i knew he was lost
in those precious moments of the all
enchanting silence
of the night that the sun was now
so cruelly trying to steal away
from him.



© Stella Armour 07-01-2017

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Karin Anderson
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Re: I Knew

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Jan 08, 2017 11:47 am

The Ernesto Cortazar video is captivating and the poem oh! so romantic. My favourite lines are 'he was again making love with me standing in his own shadow quietly.' Light of day can sometimes be cruel I now unfortunately realize Stella.

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Re: I Knew

Postby Stella » Sun Jan 22, 2017 4:58 pm

Thank you so much Karin, i would be lost sometimes without the beautiful music of Ernesto to accompany my poems :)

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Re: I Knew

Postby Adette » Mon Jan 23, 2017 11:12 pm

How beautiful and must come back to listen to the video my sound is off at present and so love his music.


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