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Guilt

Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2017 9:58 pm
by Stella
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I have forgotten to feed them
and they sit there on cold
naked branches patiently
waiting as the frost stings
spider webs.

I in my soft bed ‘neath warm
cosy coverlets
cannot sleep for my guilt
and they cannot sleep for
their hunger;

So quietly I slip from my bed
out into the freezing night air
to atone
for my thoughtlessness
and hope i will be forgiven
on a higher level,
that sleep will now come
as guilt and hunger
are sated.

© Stella Armour 07-01-2017

Re: Guilt

Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2017 11:52 am
by Karin Anderson
Your kindness is admirable and brrrr it must be so cold going out into the freezing night in the UK . A sensitive and thoughtful write indeed Stella!

Re: Guilt

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 5:36 am
by ken.brandli
You can sleep the sleep of the just now Stella. As always, you pen beautifully and evocatively, while employing a simplicity and directness that respects the subject.

Re: Guilt

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 1:44 pm
by Stella
Karin and Ken, thank you both so much for your kind comments :)