Passing by (Haiku)

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ken.brandli
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Passing by (Haiku)

Postby ken.brandli » Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:37 pm

Clouds (and boys) pass by
palm tree shadows waving, as
my daughter sunbathes

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Stella
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Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Postby Stella » Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:58 pm

A lovely summer image Ken, just right to brighten a dreary January day in England... :)

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ken.brandli
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Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Postby ken.brandli » Wed Jan 18, 2017 11:00 pm

Ta. Stinking hot down here in Australia. I am visiting family in Townsville (in the tropics).....whew, thank heavens for air conditioning.

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Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Jan 19, 2017 8:04 am

A lovely haiku Ken - great first line which breathes its young sunlit scene over a top-coat wintery day here.

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ken.brandli
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Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Postby ken.brandli » Thu Jan 19, 2017 11:38 am

Thanks Fay. A fun thing to write.

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Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Feb 14, 2017 1:51 pm

A fun write


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