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Passing by (Haiku)

Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:37 pm
by ken.brandli
Clouds (and boys) pass by
palm tree shadows waving, as
my daughter sunbathes

Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:58 pm
by Stella
A lovely summer image Ken, just right to brighten a dreary January day in England... :)

Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2017 11:00 pm
by ken.brandli
Ta. Stinking hot down here in Australia. I am visiting family in Townsville (in the tropics).....whew, thank heavens for air conditioning.

Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 8:04 am
by Fay Slimm
A lovely haiku Ken - great first line which breathes its young sunlit scene over a top-coat wintery day here.

Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 11:38 am
by ken.brandli
Thanks Fay. A fun thing to write.

Re: Passing by (Haiku)

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2017 1:51 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
A fun write