Bed of Lies

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Adette
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Bed of Lies

Postby Adette » Tue Jan 24, 2017 12:44 pm

Emotions
tossed like burning
lies float away on waters
tide raining on each passing
wave lies taken to
the grave

Ashes
to ashes dust to
dust wash the soul within
the waters crust cleansing
lies that made
me cry

Loves
promise sails the tides
broken now a web of lies
sail away sail away your secrets
carried far and
wide

Piercing
cries of pain echo into waters
deep your never-land awaits
masked by priceless
deceipt

You made your bed there
you must sleep within
waters cold and
deep

Ashes
to ashes dust to
dust wash the soul within
the waters crust cleansing
the spirit for his home
above

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Stella
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Re: Bed of Lies

Postby Stella » Tue Jan 24, 2017 1:46 pm

I hate lies too and they should be cast away as you have cleverly described and never be allowed to surface again. Finding someone out in a lie loses our respect for them and we can never fully trust them again. :(

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Adette
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Re: Bed of Lies

Postby Adette » Wed Jan 25, 2017 12:23 am

Thanks Stella
Yes me to and had many shoved down my throat but they get found out in the end.
I am late again going to bed but out in the morning - You must be in agony a friend suffers similar but not as bad as you and says the pain can be agony so pray you have good news on your test and nothing else is going wrong.

The books I cancelled as not happy with them the latest is one with large lillies and now want to improve on that so poems are on same page with same script - live and learn.
Must go my eyes are dropping, could not write earlier as my head has been banging for 4 days. nite and God Bless
Anne

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Bed of Lies

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Jan 25, 2017 12:56 am

I am really impressed with the lay out of this engaging poem. Also the theme of water makes it so compelling I feel like I am there, as we are all told lies we have to deal with. Great poetry indeed Adette!

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Adette
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Re: Bed of Lies

Postby Adette » Tue Jan 31, 2017 6:01 pm

Thanks Karin so appreciate your visit and any comments from you I take as
a compliment.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Bed of Lies

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Feb 14, 2017 1:48 pm

A poignant and an expressive write.

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Adette
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Re: Bed of Lies

Postby Adette » Wed Feb 22, 2017 11:19 pm

thank you so much for reading and great comment Seema


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