You Never Knew

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You Never Knew

Postby Stella » Fri Feb 17, 2017 5:59 pm

You combed your hair with your fingers
it was something special to you,
I loved the way that you did it
and I don’t think you ever knew.

Your love was honest never false,
you were always the gentle man.
I loved the easy way you dressed,
the other guys always spick and span.

We made love naked in the rain
it was sweet, spontaneous and fun;
laughing about it afterwards
as we lay ‘neath the summer sun.

You combed your hair with your fingers
perhaps it’s something you still do?
I absolutely adored you
and I don’t think you ever knew.

© Stella Armour 17-02-2017

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Re: You Never Knew

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Feb 18, 2017 3:59 am

A very special poem for a special person and I love how your first line repeats as the first line in the last stanza thank you Stella!

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Re: You Never Knew

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Feb 21, 2017 10:42 pm

True love poem, written with so much affection.

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Re: You Never Knew

Postby Adette » Wed Feb 22, 2017 11:14 pm

So gentle the purity of true love and the music matched the mood
loved it - the feeling left me relaxed.

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