Dream

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drllrd74
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Dream

Postby drllrd74 » Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:51 pm

Were you ever in my arms?
or was it all a dream?
did I ever taste your lips?
life's not the way it seems.

Was it all a vast charade?
the longing and the wooing?
was love ever in the picture,
did we know what we were doing?

You were young and vibrant,
I was taken by your charms;
lost in dreams of love,
smothered in your arms.

There was no hesitation,
as we danced the night away;
laughing, singing, talking,
to each rhythm we did sway.

Yes, you were in my arms,
then, you faded from my view;
like a waning dream, forgotten,
all the love we ever knew.

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Cindy
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Re: Dream

Postby Cindy » Sun Mar 05, 2017 4:16 pm

Very moving poem. Lovely, yet sad. Enjoyed it very much.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Dream

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Mar 07, 2017 11:51 pm

A poignant write, very true and honest words. take care

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Adette
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Re: Dream

Postby Adette » Wed Mar 08, 2017 9:48 pm

To this day have dreams of my 1st love and for which I have no answer except
let him go and wished I hadn't - the pain of love = very well written


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